Sahiba Kamboj

Comedy Horror Action

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Sahiba Kamboj

Comedy Horror Action

Number 6 and 9

Number 6 and 9

14 mins
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IF you combine Water melon juice with coffee or break a stone with your vision. I know you will find it strange, but why not to do so. I mean all the new inventions are the result of unknown facts, just come out of this nostalgic environment and see. Hallucination is the thing which does not allow me to follow the same road having million of footprints on it. For once, I want to try out a new combination, new story, new track and a new road. 


7 am in the morning,the weather is dark, full of black clouds, lightning has its effect all over. Wind howled about the building. An old tree trying hard to save its younger ones but could not help. In the living room, the one who is keeping an eye from right corner of a glass window is “me”. My name is eye, but it is written as “I” {our family tradition is to keep the names on single alphabet}. Suddenly the bell rang which is terribly horrifying. Slowly I reached the main door and peeped through the rusty whole. By Looking out I was back in my scenes because there is 6 feet tall, young person with dusty clothes is standing out by holding 1 meter long key. He is none other than my younger brother “A”.

Oh! What a day, you know I need to win 5 rounds of gymnastic battle to have it in my pocket. My lovely MAGIC CAR KEY “. 

I standing beside, have not came out from the shocking door bell incident and on listening to this nonsense early in the morning was just impossible. 

I- wait a sec.., before anything else tell me why have you changed the door bell to such a horrible and scary sound


A- aaaa ….I know, to wake you up early in the morning!! is not an easy job, I don’t want myself to be beaten up by your unprofessional moves 

I- “ what ? “{ hand on forehead }


By neglecting all this I asked him for what reason he is being roaming out in such a weather just for this stupid car key. Which appears to be no less than a broom..

A- “ come on! how can you forget about this, you are an….

A- You arre an agent- agent-6

I- yes, I know that both of us have an unrealistic talent or given a duty to perform.

But what is the use of this POWER OF VISION. We have never been given credit for OUR action. What a boring life!!

A person having talent with no fan following is hurting, isn’t it?

IF I had posted my pictures on Instagram of lifting a building, breaking of rock into pieces.I would have my followers in millions 

A- hey! don’t say that. you are breaking the rules

I- rules? You are the one who breaks it always

A- let me check.. aamm..in the discrepancy list I am at 23 and you crossed 40

I- ok, whatever, rules are meant to be broken. 


As the conversion is still going on, there was a new sound. 


Don’t worry this is the alarm of microwave..”tinnn nnnn…tinnn…la.laaa…tinnn…nnn”


A- great! I had been out for match and was ravenous

I- chocolate cake, I made it for you.. BECOZ I KNOW as usual you haven’t ate anything before going out

A- correct, and I love this kindness of yours.. yummmmm… delicious!!! 


After some sweet and salty talks we get back to our work I.e argument

Clock pointed at 9 . Outside the house an earthworm is waiting for us. He is MR. WORM 


MR WORM- come on, we are getting late … the captain will not spare you if you will be late again 


“A “, mark his unusual entry from the surface below where MR.WORM is standing, feeling a high voltage jerk MR. WORM floats in air which finally landed him in dump. I rushed outside with the key


I- where is MR. WORM ?

A- giggles

I - you must stop this now, mr. worm, where are you mr. worm?


Five minutes later i saw him and his appearance almost most burns my nose..


Mr. WORM- let’s go


Ready one two three.. SPARK IN THE EYES GLOWS, SLOWLY LIGHT BEGINS TO MOVE OUT. CREATING A STRAIGHT HIT ON THE GROUND. SOIL MOVES APART, AS THE PATH IS CLEAR, WE ALL WERE PULLED INSIDE…

On reaching our agency we were as usual late and the captain’s rage is high


CAPTIAN- MR. WORM make an entry in the record book that agent 9 and agent 6 completed their century for regular late arrivals.

I - captain please recheck, it may be 90 late arrivals

A- no, I think 91, 92 …or 89

CAPTAIN- oh, stop you both!! I am amazed how have you mannged to be an agents. You both scored zero in punctuality, zero in discipline, and a big zero in followings the rules


A and me staring at each other and has nothing to say but then captian’s words are unexpected


CAPTAIN- after all this, both of you are the best agents in completing the mission on time. In case of following the rules first and second position can’t be given to you becoz…

I - becoz…….it belongs to you and mr. worm

A- FORCIBLY. Any doubt …

I- absolutely NOT

CAPTIAN- what?

A - aa… captain, what’s the plan ?

CAPTIAN - give me that car key, it is the key which automatically drive the car to the place of our enemies. This has been specially designed 

I - yaaa.. here it is.

A - so what is our new mission 

I- wait, if I am not wrong the key is made in wormland.. 

A-that gymnastic tournament was conducted by members of wormland 

MR. WORM- you got it right agent 9 { A is agent 9}, everyone in the wormland know that to beat you in gymnastic is impossible. This is the reason why we have conducted the tournament

I- at end you want to see the key in safe hands, it is none other than agent 9. Moreover the crowd must have thought it was a fair conduct but in effect it was not ? OR is it ?

Oh!!! You are a genius MR. WORM. you deserve to be the captain

A- ahem……. watch it!!


Captain is behind me and listening, the moment I turned his face was as red as blood. The next second he ordered us to proceed for the mission. This time it is “ spirit state “

these words left us awe struck!!

A- captain, I think you have ceased the use of tonic Which I brought from “rodent island” for your throat, you must know that it was very expensive. 

I- rodent island was such a fascinating place but too expensive, the Tonic worth 100 coins

A- we should revisit there

Mr worm- have you lost it. what are you saying ?

A- yes, he is not using it that’s why instead of Switzerland he said “spirit state”

Captain- YOU TWO! Stop this nonsense. you heard it right it is spirit state …. And Both of you must leave there right now. THIS AN ORDERRR..

A - SPPIIIRRRIIITTT STATEEE…………

I- THE GAINT SPIRIT STATE

MR WORM - good luck agents { softly}

Captain - sometimes I doubt how you manage to solve the mysteries? But then, agent 6 and 9 are the best we have … Now be serious!

He gave the car key and instructions. “ this time it is to bring the agents back. The spirits are continuously using their power and seized our 5 agents. This started 20 days back, first one was agent 3 then 10, 5,7, 8. now you are the only left who can bring them back but this is only possible when the leader of the spirits get killed.”


A- captain, these are four you missed no. 4

I - agent 9 is right. I haven’t seen him since his last mission

Captain- agent 4 has been missing from last 4 years. All his signals stopped working. Later Mr. worm got the news he died in his last mission on spirit island. As he was also on the same mission to kill the spirit leader to avoid these ongoing incidents but failed!

Mr worm- you have 8 hours to finish the work. To return alive you need to be back by 6 pm, after the sunset your power will not work there and no one can cross the boundaries of the spirit sate thereafter. It is …

I - it is secured by black spirits

A- is it?

MR WORM- by the black magic of black spirit

We sat in the car and fixed the key inside the keyhole. “light from our eyes glows, begins to hit the car and we left:” The car is floating in air and after an hour it landed on the outskirts of “spirit state”. key began to change its colour, which is a clear indication of opponent’s area. The place is inconsistent, sky is trapped by black spirits not even a single ray of sunlight can pass through it. Looking towards the other side of spirit state it gives a contrasting appearance of white and black 


A- oh my god! how to get in ?

I- let’s move ahead 

A- so what the plan to start the mission.. woooo…aaaaa…..oooooooo……. Why are u pulling me?

I - that wall

A- awestruck! This place is far more scary than my imagination

I- the wall must be the boundary of spirit state which is protected by the army of black spirits

A- to enter the state directly is next to impossible. We need to be invisible.. are u ready?

I- always

One, two, three, spark in the eyes glows, light begins to move out. This time creating a hit around each other to generate a covering around. Now, black cover is around us.


A- this, will make imbecile remarks on them

I- agent 9, I think instead of flaunting!! we should concentrate 

A- sure, agent 6


As we reached adjacent to the wall, the magnetic pull is observed which is creating problem for us to reach the other side


A- the only way left is underground pathway

I- get, set, go


spark in the eyes glows, light begins to move out. Creating a straight hit on the ground, soil moves apart and the path is clear to go ahead. Best part is this is not visible to black spirits due to the protective cover. Few seconds later we marked our entry on ground.


A- agent 6, look those footmarks and these can not belong to spirits

I- these can be of one of the missing agent

Following them we reached a place which can be called - HEAVEN

A- what a place!!!!!!

I- breath taking

A- off course agent 6. Wait a minute BREATH TAKING are you trying to say that this place is responsible for taking away the soul from body?

I- I do’t know, but the holding says so

A- do’t underestimate us {says to spirits} we need to scan each and every tree growing here to find missing agents

I- let’s move in two different ways 

A- no, stop!!! We need to do this together otherwise the black spirits will see us


As usual i am first to start the scanning process it was a mango tree and agent 10 was seized in tree trunk. Moving ahead there is eucalyptus 


A- eucalyptus is one of the tallest trees. As 3 is tallest amongst all, so this could be…………….

I - agent 3

This time A started the process and much to our surprise. It is true. 


I - depending upon the physical personality the agents are being captivated

A- well said agent 9. Which tree is next ?


This is how we are able to discover all the agents, where agent 5 was seized in cycas { due to shortage of hair}

Agent 7 was arrested in banyan tree { as he is fat} and agent 8 was found in a shrub [because he is only 5 feet tall ]

We managed to find them all but this is only their bodies covered with clothes and no soul in it


I - we need to bring back their souls and for that a fight with the leader is must

A- first of all, we need to kill the black spirits for their leader to be dead

I - what are you waiting for, fight sequence is my favourite on any mission 

A- stop being excited, as black spirit are there on the wall or the magnetic wall. So to fight them will not be easy

Discussing few aspects agent 9 and agent 6 is standing in front of the black sprits


A- remove the cover

I - what!! They will see us

A- this is the only way to fight, and why are you sacred this is your favourite part. Isn’t it ?

I -no doubts

Agent 9 made a war cry after our exposure to the black spirit and they are all set to attack. The spark in the eyes glows, slowly the light began to move out.this time the light show is seen in the air

Agent 9 made a cyclone with light which killed 4 of the black spirit and I created a rope of light to tie the spirits. But the major drawback is magnetic pull because each time we use light to kill them some part of it strike the wall which gets even more powerful and hit us back with a jerk or sometimes tries to pull us. It took 7 hours to kill them all. We both also got injured in this war which is very painful to work further. 


I- I can’t loose hope. I am here to save all agent. EWWW……..{in pain}

A- yes, you are right {UGHHH} … agent 6. Annddd….50% of the job is done


There came a hair- raising sound


A- now what new is coming ?

I - god knows 

I AM THE LEADER OF SPIRIT STATE. YOU KILLED BLACK SPIRITS, RELEASED MY SLAVES. NOW YOU HAVE TO PAY FOR THIS SIN.

I- this is not SIN, we are saving the world from your curse

A- Who are you?

Turning his face to our side was seriously breath taking. He is 


I - AGENT 4!!!!!!!

A- how can he be agent 4?

I- see the black stud in his left ear. He is the only amongst the agents who wear it

A- wearing a stud, is not a big deal every other person wear it.

I- it is a big deal…… because these are made from a precious stone found in wormland

A- no one knows about wormland except MR. worm and the agents

I- MR. worm gifted it on his birthday

A- AGENT 4, IS THE LEADER OF THIS SPIRIT STATE. But he died few years ago

I - no, agent 9. seeing all this my sixth sense says He made an excuse to the agency about his death

A- this means MR. wrom is unaware about him. No one can hide himself from him 

THE LEADER- AGENT 6 IS ABSOLUTELY WIRGHT Awwwww…..{ looking around } FINALLY!! CAPTIAN HAS SEND HIS BESTS HERE. I WAS WAITING FOR THIS MOMEMT FROM LAST FOUR YEARS

A- ewww… ughhh.. { in pain } have you lost it, this is against the rules

LEADER- RULES!! LOOK WHO’S TALKING ABOUT RULES

YES I BEFOOLED EVRYONE. AND MY VISIT TO THE SPIRIT STATE 4 YEARS AGO WAS TO RUEL THE WORLD NOT TO WORK ON ORDERS.WHICH CLOUD BE POSSIBLE BY JOINING HANDS WITH SPIRITS.

I - you are no more an agent because of this sin. Death is the last option left with you

A- that too with my hands. Now these bests will give you a coffin to rest

LEADER- ha ha ha…… YOU ARE ON MY LAND. NOW YOU HAVE TO FACE IT  


The war begins leader with all his zest collected spirits to attack us. Agent 9 used his powers to fight them where as I am in search of souls of the seized agents. Half an hour passed but we did not reach it’s end.


A- power of vision can’t be the single way to kill him, their could be some other way

Searching all over I came back with hollow hands

I- ewww.. { pain } it’s not there

A- what ?

I- ice-cream

A- are you in your senes. How can you thought of an ice-cream in this situation

I- agent 9 use your unused brain…………. I am talking abut “SOUL”

A- me too, just joking. Now listen carefully I will use my gymnastic skills to reach his stud by the time you play your favourite game with spirits. I think he had captivated all souls in it. And once the souls are free will be dead

I- okay…. { by banging his shoulder}

A- eww….. its hurting

The next minute agent 9 was in air by a perfect black flip. He kicked his head. On the other side I made waves of light with all my zest and killed most of spirits

A- {banged his fcae and snatched the stud} told you, I will provide you a way to rest.


LEADER- you…u….. aahhh… { dead}

A- agent 6 I am done what about you?

I- { not even a single spirit is left} washed it out

A- well done 

I- you too

A- time to break the stud. Ready

I- ready

From the power of vision we break the stud and all the souls are free. Slowly all the souls are returning back to their respective deadbodies. But only 5 minutes are left

A- all the agents quickly move out of the gate and sit in the car


I- hurry


We all sat in the car agent 9 placed the key in car and all flew away 


I - agent 9 “ bring back agents “ accomplished 

A- smiled


On reaching the agency all of us warmly welcomed by captain and MR. worm


I- agents are back from duty 

captain- superb!!! Agents. You proved you both are THE BEST

A- AAaa…… this word BEST is today’s protagonist.

Captain - i didn’t get it

I - forget it captain, he said thank you.

Captian- really? I heard something else

A- giggles… ughhh..{ pain}

Captain - mr. worm take them all for treatment 

I - MR. worm I brought something for you 

Mr. worm- not again

I- {stretched my hand towards mr. worm} howz it mr. worm

MR. worm-{ surprised } black stud, this was with agent 4. How did you get it?

captain- why is it in pieces

I- so hold your breath

A- agent 6, are you still in the trauma of that holding “breath taking”

I- {making a weird face] this stud belongs to the leader of spirit state

Mr. worm - agent 4 was -the leader. But how this is possible. He can’t hide himself from the agency.

A- don’t forget mr. worm he was leader. It is very easy for him to use the spiritual power and speed the fake news

Captain- where is he now { in anger }

A- resting in his coffin

Captain - ha ha ….. 

Mr worm - {laughed } he deserves it 

Captain- so, now agents go home and take care. You will be informed soon for your next mission, TILL THEN YOU ARE OFF FROM THE DUTY. 

Enjoy your vacations.



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