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surya singh

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surya singh

Tragedy Thriller

THE SILENT MASK

THE SILENT MASK

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On April 5th, 2000, Surya, a inspector in Mumbai Police, was the most intelligent officer and he caught many big criminal and politician because of this he has many transfer from cities to cities but it is the first time he was happy with his transfer because he got a chance to work with his childhood crush sunita .

after working for 2 months , he was assigned to provide security at the birthday party of Kamal child, kamal is a doctor and sadly he lost his wife a few months ago , his wife who try to protect her 12 year old child from a kidnapper but the kidnapper kill her , kamal think that it is nice idea to make his son Happy , he is also a close friend of ACP Deep Singh.
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Along with him were Sub-Inspector Raj - who is newly recruited , assistant-Inspector kisher- surya and kisher are the best friend , sunita - the head constable , Rajgiri — an old constable nearing retirement ,who was also Surya’s father. Unknown to this team, this party would begin a nightmare.

Surya, though always focused on duty, had planned something personal that day — to confess his love to Sunita after the party.

Surya thinks it would be the best idea to confess his love and he has also prepared a golden ring for sunita,the golden ring seems to have 1 lakhs value.
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He stood as a guard at the gate of Kamal’s house, scanning the guests. His job was to check every person, watch for hidden weapons, and ensure no danger crept in. It was loud with music and laughter, but Surya stayed alert.

Sunita approached.
“Sir,” she said, “I found a boy crying. He said some older kids were bullying him in the courtyard. I want to check it out.”

Surya replied, “I’ll come with you.”

She shook her head. “No sir. We can’t both leave. Deep Singh will have our jobs.”

Surya hesitated but agreed. “Go — but be quick.”
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Minutes turned to an hour. Surya began to worry. He handed over his post to his father and went to search for her.

He wandered through the nearby area, asking people if they’d seen a woman officer. No one had.

Eventually, he came across a narrow, quiet alley. At the end, he found a trash-dumping ground. Something smelled off— more than garbage. Then, he saw blood.

Surya opened the dustbin lid.

Inside… were Sunita’s death body , her hand and leg were cut.

“SUNITA!!” he screamed. , the scream is enough powerful to crush the music sound , all joy vanished...
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Surya was called by ACP Deep Singh.

Deep slammed the table. “What excuse do you have this time?!”

Surya didn’t argue. He calmly placed ₹5 lakh on the table that he had saved for 3 years so he can spend a happy life with sunita but now it's all gone , surya said. “Let me handle the case my way. I’ll return ten times this.”

Deep Singh, greedy and corrupt, smirked. “you have One week. Then the case will CID take .”

Surya nodded.
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He gathered Raj, Rajgiri ( now he became the head constable because of sunita died), and Kisher. “We’re solving this case , father you check the CCTV footage , raj you go with my father and help him , kisher and me will visit the area where sunita dead body found.”

Raj was shocked. “How did you convince ACP?”

Surya didn’t answer.

They began the investigation. At the kamal Kishore house there is a small camera outside of the house which shows how many people enter in the alley

Rajgiri and raj ask the CCTV footage of the camera of that day to kamal Kishore, he agreed and gave them the footage , in the footage they found :

a masked teenage boy, walking out… bloody hands.

This wasn’t random. Surya suspected that the boy was blackmailed by the gang to kill sunita

He assigned Raj and Rajgiri to search the party venue for any leads. Surya said to kisher" kisher let go see some old case files ,i don't but i think this case is connected with some old and forgotten case "

After hours, they found a connection to a closed file about a gang who forced children to beg There are about 5 to 7 cases file but they were now closed the leader of the gang is Hiri Datt but kisher and surya are unknown that they were been watch by deep singh when deep singh here hiri datt gang he secretly left the place.
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Surya and Kisher tracked their old base — a dark, abandoned godown.

Inside, they found frightened children. But before they could help, then Hiri Datt and his men arrived.

Several Gunfire sounds were echoed

Surya took down 3 men of hiri datt and kisher took down 2 men then hiri datt fire the bullet and injured the left arm of surya . Kisher with anger shot at hiri datt both legs

When backup arrived, Surya tried to question the gang leader. Hiri Datt refused.

Surya cleared the room.

Hiri Datt shouting "not do this please help someone help ..."

Kisher entered the room . He saw Hiri Datt’s broken teeth on the floor. “That’s enough!” he shouted.

Surya stepped back.

Kisher leaned toward Hiri Datt’s ear and whispered something.

Hiri Datt's expression changed.

He said" ok ok I am telling you go to the port and I am really saying i don't know what happened to sunita ."

Surya went to beat him more but Kisher stopped and said " he is saying the truth".

They arrived at the Mumbai Port — and uncovered a child-trafficking ring.

Surya: “You’re all under arrest.”

The gang laughed. “We’re five. You’re two.”

Surya smiled. “Who said we’re alone?”

Police jeeps roared in. Deep Singh stepped out and said "surya you are now dead"it turns out the main leader of children trafficking is deep singh

Kisher said " I know Hiri Datt will say the truth ."

Then dozens of officers surrounded deep singh.

Deep Singh was arrested.

Surya was promoted. Kisher replaced Surya’s rank.

Later that night, Surya asked, “What did you whisper to Hiri Datt?”

Kisher replied, “I told him we had his family if he did not say true i will kill them all . Sir ,Every man’s greatest weakness… is family.”

April 10th

Surya worked through the several night. Rajgiri entered the room.

“Son,” he said gently. “Please rest. You’ve done enough work .”

Surya snapped. “You think I can sleep?! You don’t feel my pain!”

Hurt, Rajgiri quietly left.

At 11:55 PM, Surya noticed the house was empty. Suddenly, his phone rang.

It was his father.

“Surya… I found Sunita’s killer. Come to the alley. He’s here… he is—”

A gun shoot sound occur!

Surya rushed to the jeep

At 12:04 AM, he found his father, bleeding on the ground.

Rajgiri whispered the killer’s name.

Surya’s eyes widened in disbelief.

Surya remember, when he is small how his father is taking care of him when his mother left their family .

for Surya his father and sunita are the people who always stand with him when he was bullied in school because of his mother , sunita always protect him

Rajgiri died.

Surya call Kisher. “Meet me at the port, i found the killer.”

Kisher arrived, confused.

Surya said, “I know who killed Sunita.”

Kisher shock , kisher back his hand to take his gun

Then a gun sound occur in the port

Surya shot kisher in both legs.

Falling, Kisher gasped. “Yes... I killed her…”

Surya in anger shoots kisher at head , then surya is preparing to leave

Just then, Kisher’s phone rang.

Caller ID: THE GOD

Surya answer the phone.

A cold voice spoke: “Your son broke the rules kisher. But ... I trust you kisher so take your son , he is at Rajshri House. Room 7. Don’t fail.”

Surya stormed into the dark house of rajshri which has 5 floors , each floor contains 4 room 2 room at left and 2 at right but now the building has gone empty and no one is leaving in it . Surya saw the boy on the stairs running to the 5th floor

Surya chased the boy to the rooftop — only to find seven masked teenagers waiting for him with sharp knife.

They attacked.

Surya tried to hold back, but after getting stabbed and one teenager said i kill sunita in his anger surya pull out his gun.

20 gun sound has occurred

In the end… seven teenagers lay dead.

Surya said to the died body of teenagers “if you kill my family I will not see your age or what post you all are I will just kill you all …”

A radio behind a pipe crackled to life.

GOD’s voice:
“You performed exactly as I expected.”
“Your battle was recorded. Your blood... your rage... is now mine go in the last room of the 5th floor "

When surya entered the last room he saw the kisher son dead body.

GOD’s voice came from the radio
“Oh, and don’t worry about the kisher son he broke my 3rd rule not kill anyone that has special value in society, i and my son are killing beggars for many years but no one noticed but kisher son broke the rule and he purpose to show his love to sunita but when sunita deny he killed her.”

Surya’s blood ran cold.

“You’re not just fighting me now,” the voice whispered.
“You’re fighting an idea that is already inside my head , i know your every move , i make hundreds of plans to destroy you, let play a game on 30th April the doctor kamal Kishore hospital will blast , if you had power then stop me.”

Then radio blast

April 26th

Rumors filled the city.
“Surya practices black magic!”

“He kills teens to revive Sunita! , people giving reason why surya is doing black magic because whenever he kills any teenager he makes a mark on their neck ”

one person describes the mark " the mark has 2 side half mask the 1st half mask eye is very happy and it keep his finger on it lips then the second half mask eye is sad and it finger is not on the lips"

Some officers even supported the claims.

Surya enters the doctor's kamal house to take help when Surya tells all the story The doctor kamal agrees to help him and doctor kamal said i will provide you a easy entry in hospital , please not tell that man would be behind my child , i had recently sent him to the school trip for 7 days.

Surya said,"believe in me".

Late at night the kamal phone rings.

April 28th —

Surya and Dr. kamal found mini bombs in the hospital. They disabled it.

By April 29th —

Surya and doctor together found more bombs and now surya is relaxed.

That night, kamal offered a drink.

kamal: “Tomorrow will be remembered.”

Surya: “What do you mean?”

kamal: “One of the boys you killed was my son.”

Then a big blast happened

The hospital exploded. The down floor was full of fire .

Surya and kamal were on the 3rd floor but fire was reaching to ,then kamal stabbed Surya but Surya countered and kicked the kamal then surya take the axe that is for the use of emergency then surya with that axe, surya injured the kamal .

Surya said ,"why you betrayed me, don't you care the life of people".

kamal said ,"for the benefit of society, to built ...a..new...world".kamal slowly remembering the 26th April night.

On the 26th of April night :-

kamal pick up the phone and said who is speaking, next person reply the "GOD".

kamal identify who is this person he is about to call surya , then God said are you still believe him? he kill your son.

kamal said ,"what are you talking about , my son goes on a school trip for 7 days .

God said,"no he lied to you he is one of my sons who was killed by surya in rajshri building , your son too died.

kamal was shocked and fell to the ground.

then God said,"kamal your son is brave boy, he is very loyal to me , join me , we together kill surya and then we together pure this society".

kamal said," you are a psychopath, you kill people for your own fun".

God said,"I never kill people for my own fun , can't you see this society,this society is full of evil, people fight for their freedom then after gaining the freedom they kill each other for money , for love or for power .This society never want to see a person who is getting powerful than thim because they are fear they try to kill the person mentally. your son too struggling from society he was bullied in his class by the students. one day your son come to me and said, " I am going to die , my mother left me too" that time i am the one who stop him , who save your son life , you have lost your one son but i lost my seven son. we have same pain , come with me , we together destroy this society and make people to follow us . we together build a new world.

kamal after some silence he said ," I agree, these people in this world killing eachother, I will support you , tell me what I need to do to rebuild this society.

God said," hear my plan carefully".

At present:-

kamal see in surya eyes and with with smile,he takes his last breath.

Surya can't understand why kamal betray him

then,

Suddenly, a massive blade struck in surya stomach.

A 17-year-old boy has done this and he said

“I am GOD".

these words are strong enough for Surya to kill the boy then surya attack with his fist and surya is able to break GOD’s nose and his Teeth shattered.

But then the floor broken down both fallen down on the 2nd floor.

God fall on a rod , the rod has gone through it stomach.

Surya fallen on the bricks.

Barely conscious, GOD laughed.

“I was born... different. Never cried. Only watched the cruelty of society. When I was in 5th grade,

a boy who always scored average marks , one day he score full marks in the examination every one in his class started bulling him showing they are greater than him and his parents pressure him too one day I said to him why don't you die this is a painful society the boy see in my eye and

said ,
you know i want to make this society a wonderful place can you do it for me then he jumped off , can you tell why these humans discriminate each other ,

why they kill each others In my eyes humans should die and a king should emerge ,

today I will die but I will die with you and saving my future son ,

you know surya I fear you because you are strong enough to kill my son but when you lost sunita you become like a puppet for me ,

surya can you tell me why these human are fighting with each other always , they fight for their independence and after gaining independence they fight again for corruption,then they fight for discrimination , then they fight on religion then they fight on skin colour and this cycle never be ends ,

the humans never learn ,they are failure of god creation they have to die or the person who can rule them like my child ....”

Then God smiles It was God's first smile since he born his smile is very large showing his all bloody teeth and his smile is horrifying, he is the first man to laugh at the face of death.

Surya whispered, “I should’ve stopped you….i have many ..ah..ah..opportunities to destroy you ....ah...ah”

Suddenly, Raj burst into the hospital with the emergency team to save people raj went to the 2nd floor and he saw

Surya, barely alive said “please ....ah....ah..Stop ...ah ..them…”

A big blast occur.

Raj was thrown across the room

GOD’s chilling laughter echoed through the flames.

20 Years past

Raj — now a top officer — stared at his burned hand.

That burn hand reminds him his most dark past of the life

He remembered Surya’s final words: "Stop them..."

He still didn’t understand the meaning of that words.

His phone rang.

Rahul: “Dad, I’ll be late. Extra tuition class.”

“Okay, son.”

Meanwhile…

Rahul walked into a dark alley.

On his neck — a mask-shaped burn, just like Kisher’s son and other teenagers who are killed.

He entered a ruined house.

Inside sat a 32-year masked man.

the man said “Welcome, the future of GOD any of you will rule this world, will destroy the government , the government who only wants money and kill innocent people, gather your power here are the rules you all should follow :-

1 Never kill your friends

2 Never deny any order of my

3 Always be hidden from this society for fun we kill the beggars who have no use of being alive

4 Never kill the person who holds a special value in a society for example our founder of this group has a member name jaynesh he is the son of inspector called kisher but he fell in love with a girl name sunita when that girl rejected his love kisher kill her then the police officer surya get behind them at last our founder the god sacrifice himself he said to me to continue his work and my all friends died too

5 never love any girl who has special meaning or post society you can love them only if they joined us ...”

All teenager said "we will follow this "

the masked man said " tell your loves one name "

some teenager said i love my dog , some said i love my mother and some I love my sister.

the masked man come near to Rahul.

he said " what you love the most "

Rahul replied" my..my father "

Masked man said “To prove your loyalty…”

“KILL YOUR FATHER.”


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THE END


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