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NAGA PURNIMA ARAVA

Horror Crime Thriller


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NAGA PURNIMA ARAVA

Horror Crime Thriller


I Will Take You To Hell

I Will Take You To Hell

4 mins 182 4 mins 182

        I am Raya. I have a friend and her name is Sana. We both are best friends. In summer vacation we decided to go Goa. After getting all the permissions and needs we started our journey. We stayed in a friend's villa. It's a large villa in front of beach. In the backyard we found a graveyard. We are horrified after saw that. 

         

          Me and Sana only two are in that large villa. We are so tried because of journey so we decided to go to beach next day. So, we went to bed.. And started talking about secrets and we started laughing loudly. We are so happy. 


          Suddenly a girl with white long torn dress, black long hair and red eyes was watching us from the window. I observed her but Sana didn't notice that. I was horrified and I told to Sana but she starts laughing after listening. She thought I was joking. 

           After sometime she was slept but I didn't get sleep. I just starring at that window. That girl came another time. She starring at me seriously. And she starts walking. I am also starts following her. She went to that graveyard which is in backyard. I just followed her blindly. 

          She stops walking and turn to my side and she said "come with me I will take you to hell". It was terrible. Suddenly Sana came to me and slaps me. She said "why you came here come with me u mad duck... ". I didn't know what happened. I slept without consciousness. 

            I woke up next day and we went to beach and enjoyed a lot a lots of fun. Then we getting tried and we started to that villa. It's night. I am just waiting for that girl. But she not came and I started roaming in that villa. I found a room with lock. I broke the lock and I opened it. 

            The room is filled with white dresses, jewellery and girl frames who I saw at night. She is beautiful. "But why the room was locked " Questions raised in my mind. Suddenly I heard a crying voice of girl. I turned back side and she is at my back . She again said "come with me I will take you to hell".i was terrified. 

            I start running to my room. And Sana tried to control me. And she make me sleep. Next day I called to the villa owner. And I asked him what's the matter. He said...... 


**** 1 year ago ****



          A girl named Maira who is daughter to the Villa's owner. She loved to wear white dress and jewellery and she loved the white colour. She is day dreamer. She believes that there is hell and heaven. And she starts research on it. And she asked everyone come with me I will show you hell. 

          But everyone thought she was mad. Their words hurts her. And she strongly desired to show the hell to everyone to prove her that she is right and not mad. One day she did suicide. After that she was saw by other people came to this villa and ask about hell. 


**** present story continues ****

   

         I understood the problem here. I decided to stops this. That night I went to Maria's room I called her. I came to me with laughing. 

   "Come with me I will take you to hell" She said


" I am ready Maira take me" I said


"She gave a knife and she said cut your neck with this" 


" I was overwhelmed and I said Maira I want to go to heaven not to hell" I said


She said "no was not allowed to heaven then how I will take you"

 

I said " A pure soul can only allowed to heaven, I saw your picture Maira you are so beautiful and I known that you had great helping nature but think why you not allowed to heaven "


She said " Why? "


I said " Your beautiful heart was surrounded by angry that's why you are not allowed to heaven, pure your heart Maira then you will allowed to heaven ".


She saw me with beautiful smile suddenly she was changed like angel. And she starts flying into the sky. That's the last day I saw her. I didn't saw her next. We started to our home. And we are very happy as Maira. 



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