Dhruav Dakshindas

Horror Thriller Others

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Dhruav Dakshindas

Horror Thriller Others

Ordeal?

Ordeal?

5 mins
137



It’s a cold winter night, there’s a faint sound of crickets chirping, and our main character Zel Menly is playing video games. “Mom! Mom! Dad?! Ugh” Zel says, she goes down the stairs yelling for her parents trying to find them, “They’ve left for dinner, did you forget today is their anniversary” says her brother, “Oh yeah, I forgot, sorry” says Zel. “Why were you calling for them anyways” says her brother “Why do you care you little monster” says Zel as she rubs her fist on his head. *2 hours go by* and they hear someone knocking on their door, Zel checks through the peephole on their door and sees no one and thinks that the neighbour kids were just playing a prank but she still opens the door and checks to see if anyone was around but what she doesn’t know is she just made a huge mistake. “I’m going to play some videogames I am allowing you to watch some TV till 10:30pm after that I want you in your bed sleeping” said Zel “Could you please read me a story before sleeping” said her brother “Ok but only 1” said zel as she walked up the stairs. *Alarm ringing* “Ok its 10:30 he better be in his room” thinks Zel as she walks to his room, “Now read me a story I’m in my room and turned off the TV” said her brother “Yeah yeah I’m going to read it” said Zel.

*5 minutes go by* Zel is done reading the story and she is about to leave but she hears a loud noise from her attic, “What was that sis” says her brother, “Don’t worry little dude its nothing its probably just some racoons or rats” says Zel. She goes to the stairs to the attic to check it and she sees a massive red star and a red circle on it and gets confused as she’s never seen it before “My brother probably did it” she thinks to herself, *beep* she gets a text from her friend it says “DUDE CHECK THE NEWS RIGHT NOW” after getting the text she goes downstairs and turns on the TV and puts the news. *BREAKING NEWS- In many people’s houses mysterious red circles with stars in them have been appearing, apparently it’s supposed to be some sort of ritual to summon a demon but as we all know that’s not true haha that’s all folks” plays on the TV, she gets scared and starts to panic “what do I do what do I do what do I DO!” she thinks to herself, “alright alright I just need to calm down and think” she thinks to herself, then she decides to just go to sleep since nothing has happened. *It’s 2 AM* *BANG* Zel wakes up after hearing a loud thud from the kitchen, she thinks it is probably her brother who is gone to get a snack, she walks down to the kitchen to see no one there but a note *Go oxM9mi outside and IFJWWUFM follow the Ifmf arrows* she reads of the note. She goes outside and sees someone standing there creepily then she looks back to close the door and the man disappears “What the hell was that” she thinks to herself, then she looks down and sees some arrows so she follows them, they lead her to a gravestone she walks up to it. *Zel Menly* it says on the gravestone, she walks back and trips and gets hurt on her leg, she starts shaking with fear, she runs back to her house but no ones there, she starts to freak out even more then suddenly a man walks down the stairs with red stuff all over his hands.


“Hey, Zel” says the man in a raspy voice, “How do you know my name!?” asks Zel as she’s freaking out but the man does not respond instead he just stands there smiling creepily, she starts to feel a bit dizzy and faints. She wakes up in her attic tied to a chair on top of the star, she looks around to see candles lit up everywhere, “Help! Help! Help!” she screamed but no one comes, “Are you ready” asked a mysterious voice, “What who are you? Let me go” said Zel, “Are you ready to be sacrificed to a demon” said the mysterious voice, “What!? No! Why are you doing!?” said Zel as she slowly started to cry out of fear, “I have to, I’m sorry” said the mysterious voice as they revealed themselves, “Bro?” said Zel, “Yeah, It’s me I’m so sorry sis I wish I didn’t have to but if I don’t then he will come here and kill us all” said Zel’s brother, “WHO! TELL ME WHO!” said Zel, “The demon” said Zel’s brother, the ground starts shaking as a portal opens up underneath the chair sucking it in as Zel is screaming for her brother to stop it but he never stops it, the chair is almost sucked up and- *ALARM RINGING* “Huh what where am I” said Zel, “Come down honey breakfast is ready” said Zel’s mom, “Huh maybe it was just a dream” Zel thought to herself.

Or was it.


THE END

Note: I was actually writing this for school but I thought that it was a good story so I put this here tell me if I need to improve on anything also the gibberish in the letter was intentional so don't be confused and tell me if I should make a part 2 idk



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