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Kevin Anthony

Horror Action Thriller


4.4  

Kevin Anthony

Horror Action Thriller


24 Hours

24 Hours

11 mins 80 11 mins 80

(One girl woke up in a horrible land, clouds are red and shady, broken coffins and skulls, that place looks like a grave to her)


"Where I'm? Why I came to this place!", said the girl.


(A soul with a white face coming to her)


She said, " Who are you! You look like a demon!" It said, " yeah, I'm not a demon but you gonna change as a demon!" What are you telling me about? Why I'm here," said the girl. It said, "yeah let me explain, I'm Dark soul' and this place is called 'Dark Valley'.all the human's souls will come who died in the earth" what? But I do not die!", said the girl. "Yeah, correct human's souls which came to this place, they'll forget all their details! Including you, tell me what's your name?", said the dark soul. She said, " yes, what's my name?". your name is Carson", said the dark soul. "How do you know my name?" It said, " I'm the dark soul I know everybody's details their name everything because I'd made by the lord". Carson said, " but I do not die! Why I came to this place? 


It said, " Hey I already told know, " you forgot everything. you had killed by a person". Carson said, " so who is that? Why that guy killed me?". "I can't tell that details but I gonna ask one question can you tell the answer to that!", said the dark soul. Carson said, " tell what's that".

It said, " if I told that person who killed you, what you'll do?". She said, " I'll kill that guy!". Huh, "that's why I didn't tell", said the dark soul. " "you can tell who is that because I can't kill that guy, I already died!", said Carson. " It said, " yes, correct but you've one chance to get your life back!" ."What? It is there!", said Carson. It said, " yes sure, we'll give a chance for those guys who died but it's not easy to do!" She said, " I've to do because I've only this!"."I love your braveness, okay I'll give a quest for you can do that? But other human souls couldn't do this!, They'd died. 10 or 11 souls escaped from this place", said the dark soul. 


She said, " yeah, I'm ready, tell me what I've to do!". It said," can you see that!". "Yes there's a forest, said Carson. "It's not only a forest, but it's also called Dark valley's forest. A lot of angry and hungry demonic creatures are living in that place", said the dark soul. "Okay, don't tell me to go to that place please!", said Carson. " if you wanna resurrection, you should do this!", said the dark soul. She said, " okay I'll do that". It said, " Take this crucifix (A cross with a figure of Jesus Christ) A huge well is situated in the center of the forest. You should throw this crucifix in the well, you should do this within 24 hours". "If you did that, I'll give you the resurrection or if you couldn't! I'll send you to hell forever". Carson said, " Oh, it's very easy, I'll go through this forest and throw this crucifix into that well"


"Haha, it's not easy, that big a well is connected with the hell, so many dark creatures living in that huge well, that will kill you, be careful. Use this glass piece, that will show the way to the well and keep this pocket-sized clock". Said by the dark soul. " how this glass piece shows the way?", asked Carson. "You just show that in the sun rays! Now I wanna go, so best of luck!", said the Dark soul.


"Oh my God this forest looks so dark and creepy", said Carson. 

(She walks through the forest her footsteps disturbed the demons of the dark dimension. Suddenly, a noise cane from the bunchy Trees, she gets close to see about that! She met another soul) " Hey who are you?", said Carson. "Hoo! Who are you?", said the other soul? " I'm Carson!" My name is Mark, I came to this place for my resurrection", said Mark. "huh, me too! Are you dead? asked by Carson. Mark said, " I don't know, that dark soul told me about my death but I do not remember that"." I'm also coming for my resurrection, " said Carson. "I think, it's not easy! Because I saw a demon, that looks very dark. It has two red eyes but I couldn't saw the face", said Mark.

" how do you escaped from that creature", said Carson. He said, "I just showed the crucifix(crucifix- A cross with a figure of Jesus Christ) it vanished!" 


"We must throw our crucifix into the huge well. You know that we'll is connected with the hell", said Carson. Mark said, " yes! That dark soul told me about this and about the dark dimension!" (Carson suddenly took her picked sized clock) "But we should do this within 24 hours!", said Carson. Mark said, " yes! But now we have 23 should and 10 mins". Carson said, " Oh, we have no time! Let's do this mission together. Are you ready Mark?" Yes! Let's finish this mission and go our home" (finally, both took a decision and they walk through this dark valley's forest)"oh this forest so creepy wait", said the son. "What happened Carson?" She said, "How we'll go to the well! I don't know the way for that!" Mark said, " hey that dark soul gave a glass know" yes! I forget about that. Wait I'll take my glass, we should go right side"


"Carson, we have only 21 hours", said mark. She said," yeah, Hey mark lie down! lie down!" He asked, " what happen? "See that A devil eating a creature, " said Carson. He said, " so weird, hey Carson sees that eyes it's eyes in yellow and it has long teeth". She said, " take your crucifix mark right now!" (That crucifix slipped from Mark's hand. Suddenly that devil looked and it gets close to Mark) "Oh my god, that crucifix slipped from my hand", said Mark. (that devil get too close and Mark is Screaming) " Somebody please help me, I gonna die!" (Suddenly Carson took her Crucifix and showed it to the devil and it disappeared) "thank you very much, Carson!", said Mark. She said, " haha, you cried! You're so frightened!" Yeah, I'm really scared. I thought, I gonna die but you saved me! Thank you", said Mark. She said, " it's okay but don't say 'thank you because we are friends!" 

(Mark was smiled and he picked his crucifix)


"Right, let's go", said Mark." are we going in the correct way?", asked Mark. She said, " yeah, Mark. We should go straight!" (They spent 13 hours for walking and they're reached 75% close to the well. Now, they're in the peak of a Mountain) "Wow, it's very beautiful", said Mark." Yeah, this place looks like heaven!". Carson said, " Mark we reached 75%". He said, " how do you know that?" She said, " can you see that place!". "Yeah, that place is so dark, I guess that well is situated there," said Mark. (they walked for a while) Mark said, " we have only 12 hours". She said, " We should make a tent because the clouds are dark!". Mark said, "yes! We should not travel at night". " see that there's a cave", said Carson. (They reached close to the cave that cave looks horrible, it's rocks got rubbish and they couldn't see inside, due to the darkness.


Carson said, " Mark we want some woods for fire". Mark said, " okay, I go and search for those woods". (Mark walk through the forest as alone for searching the woods) "Something is disturbing me", said Mark. (He picked the crucifix from his pocket and he holds that till he reaches his cave) " Oh my god, I can't make the fire!", said Carson.

"Wait I'll come because I know how to do", said Mark. (Finally, Mark made the fire) Carson said, " 10 hours left! Mark". "It's okay we reached 90%, let's sleep for 5 hours, said", Mark. She said, " yeah we're so tired!" (10 mins later) "Carson are you slept?", asked Mark. She said, " I couldn't sleep, you tell me how can I sleep our life is gonna end! Because if we couldn't finish this mission! What we'll do?"

(Carson is crying) Mark said, "don't talk like this, because we can do it! I know we can! , ha why are you crying now? (Mark touch her shoulder and he trying to motivate her)


He said, "I'll save you this is my promise!" (She hugged him) "you're my best friend Mark", said Carson. He said, " I'll do anything for you!

Believe me.....


Mark and Carson are sleeping. A noise coming from outside. That voice told, "you gonna die! you gonna die!" Carson woke up that noise came three to four times. She looked outside, again that voice said, "come outside Carson! Come out!" She picked her crucifix (Crucifix- A cross with the figure of Jesus Christ) and she went out. A complete silence, except her foot sound. And that sound coming from the cluster of trees. Its bushes are very dark. Her foot sound disturbed the devils. She saw a dark yellow eye in those bushes, she gets too close. Suddenly, wolves are screaming. So she turned and looked back but she couldn't find anything. That sound came from the bushes that were stopped. She felt miserable, so she ran away from the bushes to the cave. Mark is sleeping and she slept. After a few minutes, Mark called,

"Carson! Carson!". She woke up and asked," what?" He said," can you see that?"." what you mean!", said Carson. Mark said," behind you!"

She turned back immediately, a nasty bruised devil swallow her face.

Suddenly, she woke up and screamed. Mark asked, " what's happened? why you so loud!". Carson said," I saw a devil which said, we gonna die and it swallows my face!". Mark said," It's just a dream go and sleep tomorrow we'll go to the huge well and throw our crucifix into it and we'll go home. Right!"


(They must finish this mission within 24 hours. So now they have 

00:59 mins left) that both traveled entirely the forest and finally. They get too close to the well. (00:24 mins left) Mark said, " Carson we have 24 mins ". Carson said, " I'm so panic I don't know, what we gonna do!"

"Wait! see that dark place, " said Mark. (A complete silence) Mark said," Are you ready to do this?". She said," yeah sure. Take your crucifix, Mark!" (00:12 mins left). Finally, they found the huge well. "Mark lets go closer to it", said Carson. " Oh no! See that, I think it connected to the core on the under of the well". Suddenly, A devil came from the well. Mark said," Carson go and hide!". Mark and Carson hid on the bushes. (00:04 mins left) Mark said," Carson we have 4 mins more! We must throw our crucifix into the well". She said," Okay but how? Many devil are surrounded us!". He said," Okay! I have an idea, first I'll go and that devil will take me. at that time. You can go and throw it." She said, " what about you?". He said," 3 mins left let's go! (00:03 mins left) Mark gets close to that devil. At that time Carson reached the well. Carson said," Mark come on let's finish this together!" He said," I think it's not possible! Throw your crucifix!" She said, " I can't do that without you!"


(00:02:30 mins left) that devil swallowed Mark's hand. He got nasty wound, so he sat on that sand and the devil came by running to Carson and that devil throws her in the well but she holds the walls of the well. many demons coming from the under to kill Carson. Her hands are slipping from the walls and that devil opened it's mouth and gets closer to her face. Mark took his crucifix and ran to that devil. He said," stay away from us bloody evil". He touched its face by his crucifix. That evil got a huge wound, so it's screamed. Carson said, " my hands gonna slip!". Suddenly Mark holds her by his hand. She said, "Thank you, Mark!" He said, " Don't say thank you because we are friends"."Let's throw our crucifix!". He said, " Don't forget me after you go to your home". (Carson smiled) suddenly that devil holds Mark's body. he holds Carson on his Right hand in the edge of the well and he has the crucifix on his left hand. Carson said, " Mark! Kill that!". He said," I can't do Anything! If I took this crucifix from it. It will kill both of us, stay happy Carson!". She said," what do you mean!". he said, throw your Crucifix fast as you can!" She told, " I can't do that!" There's no time for argument do it now!", said Mark.


(00:00:30 secs left) she said, " how can I do that without you!".

He said," You can! You will! Because I'm with you! goodbye". 

 (00:00:12 secs left) she said, " I'm so sorry!". (00:00:06 secs left)

She threw her crucifix into it. She felt like drowning on the clouds. Finally, She woke from her bed at her house. She doesn't know 

It's real or dreams but she remembers those memories spent by Mark...


"I lose Best Guy!"

 Thank you, Mark...


THE END


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