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Riti Verma
3 months ago

Nice one

3 months ago

Nice one


ANAMIKA KAPOOR
4 months ago

Good hand-picked story which u visualise and witnessed in ur mind and pen down it through ur feelings

4 months ago

Good hand-picked story which u visualise and witnessed in ur mind and pen down it through ur feelings


Kawaldeep Singh
10 months ago

good

10 months ago

good


Siddhartha Dua
10 months ago

It's a thought provoking story sharmila. Ho well you have captured the emotion of a young girl and her mother. I am mighty impressed by your work. the way you narrated the feelings is exemplary. I am eagerly awaiting for the next one. Do check out my story as well and share your feedback.

10 months ago

It's a thought provoking story sharmila. Ho well you have captured the emotion of a young girl and her mother. I am mighty impressed by your work. the way you narrated the feelings is exemplary. I am eagerly awaiting for the next one. Do check out my story as well and share your feedback.


swapnil kamble
1 year ago

If yu took itas short story it might have work great story...but yu become a real story teller by showing real story about unhygenic condition how they live. Without speak their problem ..they uses their problem as solution to make their life smooth and happy living .....when ruch people make mistake every time and uses their problem as fate or luck.....and say that..its bad day for me.....whose face did i see today?...i nd left unsolved to god

1 year ago

If yu took itas short story it might have work great story...but yu become a real story teller by showing real story about unhygenic condition how they live. Without speak their problem ..they uses their problem as solution to make their life smooth and happy living .....when ruch people make mistake every time and uses their problem as fate or luck.....and say that..its bad day for me.....whose face did i see today?...i nd left unsolved to god