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Abstract Drama Romance

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Abstract Drama Romance

Heart That Will Beat Longer

Heart That Will Beat Longer

6 mins
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This story is about a girl who loved a man madly and she, unfortunately, died after being with him just for a while, leaving a heart that will beat longer.

Baley a kind and innocent hearted women started her study in a middle school. With time she made so many friends and also met the one who she fell in love with.

As the days passed the intensity of love grew deeper and deeper. She shared this matter with her friends, and they suggested her to propose him before he will start his relationship with any other girl. So Baley with courage decided to propose him taking a long breath at the moment.

The name of the guy was Kristen who made Baley this kinda mad. Coincidentally she met Kristen's best friend Jack and convinced him to propose Kristen on behalf of her.

Jack told Baley that Kristen also has a crush on her but was unable to say her about this because he was a sneaky man. So he gave her assurance that he will do everything for them.

After that conversation,Jack and Kristen left for their regular evening walk and Jack narrated all this matter with Kristen.

Kristen started blushing thinking about how he was going to face Baley the next morning, and he said to Jack that he was making him nervous.

Jack asked Kristen what answer he will give to Baley about her proposal.

Anxiously Kristen replied with yes.

Listening to yes Jack in joy hugged Kristen and waited for the coming day. He was more curious than Kristen to give this good news to Baley.

In the morning Jack searched Baley.

And finally, he saw her with her friends, in a nervous way he shared this good news with her and Baley started hooting in joy everybody in their school looked at both Jack and Baley. Everybody started laughing and started gossiping that haply, Baley lost her mind.

This day Kristen was absent because he was nervous about how to face Baley after saying yes to her proposal.

The next day both met and started a conversation excitedly. Sharing their phone numbers with each other both started talking to each other in their free times.

As their session was going to over they were supposed to admit themselves into another school and both decided to get admission in the same school where they can see each other daily. And they did it. Their relationship was going good there were ups and downs but both were one soul in two bodies, so they faced everything with courage and strength.


Time passed, both completed their study courses Kristen started his Business and made himself successful and Baley started an NGO. Now Kristen's parents forced him to get married they told him that they need a daughter-in-law because her mother was suffering from arthritis.

So he asked Baley that whether she was ready to get married or not. Baley smilingly told him that she was waiting for this lifetime commitment and she was ready. She further said that she was not sure whether her parents will accept him or not so the decision was upto them she further added to Kristen that send his parents to her home.

Kristen convinced his parents to go to Baley's home as he was madly in love with her and wanted her to become his life partner. He further included that they were also in a love affair with each for almost 23years.

So Kristen's parents agreed to him and visited Baley's home with the marriage proposal. Luckily their fate did a favor to them and Baley's parents approved Kristen as their Son-in-law. As they saw Kristen's behavior, character they thought that he was the perfect partner for their daughter. And they further said when they were supposed to complete the formalities of marriage.

And both Kristen and Baley got married in the coming month, in a good way with their parental support, and started their married life happily.

After some months Baley fell ill and she shared this matter with her husband.

He decided to take her to the hospital for check up in the next morning. Both woke up and got ready for the hospital. Reaching the hospital Kristen talked to a doctor and suggested Baley to sit in the waiting room. The doctor entered his room and Kristen came to Baley and told her to share each and every problem with the doctor without any fear, so he took her to the doctors cabin. 

Baley entered the room and started narrating the problem. The doctor gave her medicines and told her to do some tests.

Kristen took Baley for tests, in the next building of the hospital.

After completing the formalities the reports came and the ward boy called Kristen and gave the reports to him. Kristen left Baley in a room as her knees were aching badly so he told a nurse to stay with her to accompany her.

Kristen visited the doctor who checked Baley and who suggested the tests.

He gave him those reports in a tense way as he was afraid to lose her wife.

The doctor started observing the reports and he concluded. He said to Kristen that her wife has a serious problem. She cannot survive.

Listening to this statement Kristen fell on the table in shock. The doctor further included that it's better for Kristen to take care of her in the home as she can die anytime. Spending money on her treatment was of no use. Kristen cried a lot, and he visited his sick wife and told her that they are leaving for home. He shared nothing there in the hospital with her wife. Kristen was only remembering the moments he spent with Baley. He also remembered how she used to serve her parents but still God doomed her like this.

Baley asked Kristen in the car that why he was upset. Kristen said nothing in reply.

On reaching home he shared everything with her. Baley bravely tried to stop Kristen as he was crying badly. She told Kristen that she will love him always. It is a plan of destiny to separate us for sometime, don't cry my love if I will die we will meet in heaven and she hugs him.

She holds Kristen's hand and talks to him and says him that you want to see my heart beating longer.

Kristen says yes, she says so she will donate her heart. And she as a last wish says Kristen to support her and to accept this decision.

She played with Kristen's hair, nose the way she used to do, and cried. The next day she cooked good food for her husband and served it. Kristen tried to help her but Baley refused.


After completing their dinner they went to the bedroom and slept. But Kristen was unaware that he was sleeping with her for the last time. Waking up in the morning Kristen called her many times to wake up but she didn't. Then Kristen came to know that she was no more. He cried a lot. But courageously he took her deceased body to the hospital because he had promised Baley that he was going to make her last wish come true after her death.

Baley before her death gave her husband her jewellery, cash, cards whatever she was having because she was knowing that she was going to die early due to her poor health conditions.

In the hospital, Kristen donated her wife's heart to a poor girl and left with her body to the graveyard.

After completing the funeral he left her in the grave and cried over it a lot and screamed yeah, “the heart that will beat longer”.

Then Kristen used to visit that poor girl just to listen to her beloved wife's heartbeat and he also used to provide necessary things to that girl so that she can live a happy life.


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