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Disha Sharma

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Disha Sharma

Crime Thriller Others

The Guilty Ones

The Guilty Ones

4 mins
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 The pulse of the music, the flashing neon lights, the synthetic bliss—that was the world of Liam, Chloe, Marcus, and Ben.

 They were inseparable, a constellation of recklessness orbiting the next big thrill. Their nights were a blur of rave parties and freedom, their days a haze of shared secrets and easy laughter.

They went everywhere together, bound by a camaraderie that felt unbreakable, fueled by the intoxicating belief that consequences were for other people.

Then came the night the music stopped. It wasn't intentional. It was a panicked reaction in a dimly lit, isolated parking lot, fueled by adrenaline and too many questionable choices.

 The details were a gruesome blur, but the outcome was stark and irreversible: a body lay still. "God, we have to call someone!" Ben choked out, his voice thin with panic, tears already streaming.

"No, Ben, no. You want to throw away everything? Our lives? Think!" Chloe hissed, her eyes wide, darting into the darkness. Anxiety coiled tight in her stomach. Liam, ever the pragmatic leader, took control. "She's right. No one saw us. We bury it. Tonight.

We never, ever speak of this." Driven by terror and a desperate instinct for self-preservation, they buried the secret—literally and figuratively. For a time, the silence held. In the daylight, they played the part of successful, happy young adults.

Yet, beneath the veneer of normalcy, the earth had shifted. Every late-night whisper, every sudden door slam, every shadow seemed to hold an accusation.

The haunting began subtly. It started with shared, vivid nightmares, too precise to be coincidence. Then came the chilling plea, a voice whispering on the edge of hearing, demanding they journey "abroad to penance." "Did you hear that?"

Marcus whispered one night during a cramped dinner, his hand shaking so badly he spilled wine. "Abroad... to penance." Liam slammed his fist on the table. "It's the stress, Marcus! We're burning out. Fine. We go. We go far away, we detox, and we stop talking about ghosts!" Consuming them with guilt, they agreed, convincing their families they needed a year of travel to find themselves.

Their penance took them to a remote, windswept town in Iceland. It was there the series of escalating tragedies began. The first to die was Ben.

They found him one icy morning at the base of a cliff. The local police ruled it suicide. Chloe gripped Liam's arm, her nails digging in. "They were punishing him! It's starting, Liam. It's paying the guilt." "Stop! Stop it, Chloe!" Liam yelled, the isolation grating on his nerves. "It was the guilt he couldn't handle! It wasn't... it wasn't the spirit."

 But even as he spoke the words, the anxiety was a suffocating shroud. With three remaining, the guilt became a palpable, living entity.
Then, a few months later, Marcus was found dead in a hot spring. The coroner cited a sudden cardiac arrest. Now only Liam and Chloe were left. They were frantic, mistrusting every glance. "You think they'll stop now?" Chloe pleaded, her eyes red-rimmed and vacant. "Just the two of us?" Liam felt the knot in his chest tighten, a fear so profound it tasted like rust. "I don't know," he admitted, finally broken. "But we can't let it win."

Liam was the last one standing. He survived a near-fatal avalanche, miraculously pulled from the snow just hours from death. Lying weak and alone in a sterile hospital room, he thanked God.

 The haunting had ceased. He was the survivor, but the deeper mystery persisted: How were his friends truly killed, and why did the haunting stop with him? The case was reopened back home.

Detectives and investigators, baffled by the pattern of deaths, discovered the truth was far more twisted than a simple haunting. The spirit they had so feared, the ghost demanding penance, was an echo of a mistake far grander than they knew.

 Forensic evidence revealed that the body they had buried that fateful night—the body they thought belonged to the person they had wronged—was a stranger killed in an unrelated train accident miles away.

The real person they had intended to corner that night had left the parking lot unharmed, long before the tragic events unfolded. The haunting spirit was simply their own crippling guilt, manifesting as a terrifying echo of a crime that, while still an assault, had not been a murder.

Liam hadn't survived the spirit; he survived himself. The subsequent deaths of Ben, Marcus, and Chloe were not acts of supernatural retribution, but the crushing, tragic results of their own psychological collapse—suicide, accidental death fueled by anxiety, and perhaps a final, desperate act of violence between the remaining two.

The only truly guilty ones were the friends themselves. 


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