Naila Hina

Action Crime Thriller

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Naila Hina

Action Crime Thriller

Mystery Of Enderson Case! Naila Hina

Mystery Of Enderson Case! Naila Hina

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She was standing upside down close to the wall, in her favorite yoga position. When her elder sister called several times she still ignored her! It was her belief that if you take things as seriously as you ignore the neon signs and noise pollution on the streets, life can be heaven! 

Now her sister was in the room but Neelam could only see her well-pedicured feet in front of her eyes! 

The phone bell started ringing suddenly but the mobile was a bit far from her reach! So she searched for something and found a scale on a side table near her and from that scale, she managed to get the mobile phone closer to her and attended the call! 

You are still there! Hey move girl, you gotta go now! Hurry up!

It was her class fellow on the call shouting to remind her the same what her sister was trying to do for hours. That is she had to attend the wedding ceremony of her class fellow from college in another city.

Neelum jumped to her feet not very willingly but as she had promised to her friend to attend the wedding she had to go.

Hey take your bag girl, I packed your things. What will you wear there without these?

But Neelam was out of the door and house as well until then.


 The train was full but she was in first class so felt alone after a while. Bored she got out of the compartment and in the small corridor outside of the room but inside the train. Suddenly the train stopped. She busted right into another passenger and cursed!

Hey! It's not my fault. Are you blind ?? 

She heard a melodious male voice but was too proud to see or even reply to him! On her way to the dining hall, she felt a bit of tension in the train. Cops were moving here and there. Someone might have pulled the chain to stop the train. She carelessly entered the dining hall and acquired a table. Another guy came and sat in front of her. It didn't take any effort on her part to recognize the handsome man. He was the same who busted into her like a bulldozer a few moments ago. Although she had turned a blind eye towards him she definitely was a keen observer!

I'm Ali Humza. And your good name please? He enquired and she stared at him like he was joking.

Pardon! She exclaimed.

I only know Ameer Hamza of Dastan e Ameer Hamza. The famous epic. She continued. Some of her unmentionable parts were still aching!

Well, Tilism Hoshruba is my all times favorite too but we are facing other problems here really! He replied patiently.

Are you X-2 or Sherlock Holmes?

I'm both, two in one! I'm an officer on duty here for the murder case of Enderson here! Inspector Ali Humza. He showed his badge to her.

So am I a suspect? She widened her big eyes

No, it's normal. We are investigating everyone here on this train.

Who died? She interrogated him instead.

Mrs. Enderson, inside the toilet of her compartment. It's been sealed now. The area is under high security now. He explained. Watching her closely.

The guy was six feet three inches with well shaped athletic body and six-packs. Green eyes were very deep and penetrating.

But rather than enjoying his beauty, she said: Let's look at the body. C'mon. She stood up and for a moment he got dumbfounded on her boldness.

I'm talking about the dead body, Mister! She rolled her eyes. And he literally blushed. Anyhow he followed her as though she knew the way!

After drawing the first look at the body, she hopped outside the train saying: Let's get going. We need to move fast!

Unbelievably he followed her outside the train as well as the railway station to his black Chevrolet Silverado. She fell on the passenger seat and ordered: Hotel blue star, please.

What! Why! But she was in deep sleep as if she's already in some five-star hotel room or home!

Are we saving the universe now? How did you get the clue that hotel blue star has anything to do with the dead one? Enquired the inspector.

Have you not seen the little broach on Mrs. Enderson's sari? It was a blue star, this hotel's monogram! She murmured carelessly. And Humza stared at her astonishingly.

Finally, they reached the hotel Blue Star and he handed the car keys to the doorman and entered it. It was a good hotel with fine dining and comfy restrooms with great service.

Neelum went straight to a table. So he had no choice but to follow her.

There were two guys sitting on a table close by. One was tall and skinny and the other one was bald and a bit fatty. Both were in deep conversation. They could hear the notes as the dining hall was almost empty as this was not lunchtime yet!


Tomorrow my dear. At 6 p.m. sharp.On our boat, near mystery island! Be punctual! The skinny guy gave his final orderer to the short Humpty Dumpty and he swayed his bald head in affirmation.

So what would you like to eat at this hour madam? Humza asked her but she stood up and on her way out she purposely smashed with the waiter passing by. 

Oh, I'm sorry madam The waiter apologized. 

Blue Star! She hushed whispers in his ears and for a moment the waiter got confused but at last, put something on her extended palm and went back to serve other people sitting on a few tables in the big hall.

In the car when Humza enquired about what was it, she replied

The blue star badge of course! Our gangue way pass!--------

 The big boat near the harbor carried freight and sailors were busy with work. There was the usual hustle and bustle of the freight forwarding and shipments.

You look better in this Tomboyish look dear! Humza teased her who was wearing a blue turban over a white uniform, resembling the sailors around, just like him. It was a play game for the inspector to get the uniforms.

She bravely jumped over the boat without his help, twisting her false mustaches, which suited her as well.

The sun looked like a golden penny on the horizon, big enough but set in the deep sea at that hour. Both of them got mesmerized by the beauty of it at this hour of sunset. 

When finally all the cartons were shipped or rather boated, the inspector called his team and suddenly the atmosphere got filled with the sirens of police boats and helicopters over the boat. 

The sailors got nervous and gave up after a moment of the fight. The cartons were filled with drugs and weapons, too dangerous for the peace of the world. They arrested the captain and the sailors around the boat without getting much resistance on their part.

After the investigations, they came to know about Mrs. Enderson being a part of the drug mafia but had decided to rebel against that plague which had been eating the minds and healths of the young generation for decades.

All got arrested and Neelam ran to the harbor, saying: OMG! It's almost night and I have to attend my friend's wedding!

Humza got stunned again and rushed to her and drove her back to the city and dropped her at the wedding banquet.

Can I see you sometime? He reluctantly asked, shoving his name card in her purse. She rolled her eyes and went to the wedding hall whistling his favorite tune! That left him astonished, as usual!


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