Saravanan P

Abstract Drama Inspirational

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Saravanan P

Abstract Drama Inspirational

Two Critics

Two Critics

3 mins
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"How important appreciation is for the works; Criticism is too important."

 

Both help in the development of the works done by the writer.

 

Both must be done with honesty.

 

If false appreciation and hate criticisms reach a person, it will affect him so badly."


Pranav packs the lunch for himself and his sister.


Pranav wakes up his younger sister Aishu and asks her to get ready a little fast, as He is going to attend an important meeting.


Aishu feels so tired due to heavy written assignments given in school and She could not handle such work in two days.

 

Pranav says to Aishu, "The purpose of assignments is to apply what We learn not just paperwork which you write with the aim of completing without understanding".

 

Critic brother please come and talk about this to my teacher and write a letter to the state education department angrily replies tired Aishu who gets ready packs her bag and leaves with him.


Pranav drops Aishu in school and Aishu without saying bye to him walks into the school.


Pranav reaches his news office and walks into it.


Pranav works in the movie and latest gadgets review section in the online mode of the newspaper.


Pranav works as an honest critic in the office and is used especially by the office to work on famous movies and products.


Pranav while working on the review of the recent comic game released gets an update from his colleague Teresin that both are assigned to watch the latest movie and review it.


Pranav reads the details of the movie gets an angry face for some time and makes an evil smile.


The movie Pranav going to review is the movie in which his friends in college who turned into his bitter rivals worked as writers.


After watching the movie, Pranav lets Teresin's name in the reviewer name column and makes honest points about the movie and writes more detailed points on negative points of the movie, compares it with other good movies to prove that He is the best compared to his rivals and gets contended.


Pranav returns home and looks at Aishu appreciating a young neighbour's child's drawing and then points out the corrections in her drawing.


Pranav gives her a drawing book and a coloured box.


After some days,


Aishu calls her friend Tanya to her house at the weekend.


Pranav preparing the food overhears their talking with Aishu strictly pointing out the corrections in Tanya's drawings and then saying the good things about her drawing.


Pranav calls Aishu from that place and asks her about different approaches to teaching a young child and her friend about drawing good points and mistakes in their work.


Aishu explains "The young child is starting the drawing I must appreciate her efforts and then let her know the mistakes, I cannot harm her interest and must use my words carefully


But my friend Tanya could understand why I was saying her, so I can point out her mistakes first which is important than the good points using my words carefully."

 

Pranav realises how one act of his vengeance spoiled his entire work of honest criticism and also his co-workers and might have hurt the persons who have done the work.


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