miss president part 2

I have just finished reviewing the text for clarit I'my, spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Here's the revised version:

"I am currently in the process of rewriting my previous story, "Miss President 2," which I wrote a few years ago. It has been some time since I worked on a political story, so I appreciate your patience as I work on this rewrite. I am enthusiastic about sharing this updated version with all of you, and I hope you will enjoy it.

After her victory over the Democratic challenger, President Miss Haley Tyler Blue, Miss President 2 is preparing to be sworn into office. She will be only the second woman president to be sworn into the presidential office in the history of the USA.

A couple of hours before she was getting ready to be sworn into office, shots rang out in the US Capitol. Miss Haley Tyler Blue has been shot. A few Secret Service agents rushed over to see if Miss Haley Tyler Blue was okay. "Miss President, are you okay? Can you move?" Miss Haley Tyler Blue states, "Of course not, I have been shot and I am not okay." The Secret Service was rushing Haley Tyler Blue to the hospital for treatment.

When she's rushed to the hospital, Miss Haley Tyler Blue finds out that she was shot in the arm. She tells her favorite and most trusted Secret Service agent, "Those people can't even shoot straight. Whoever hired this person to kill me missed, and missed badly."

"After they take this bullet out of my arm, I want to go on national TV and give the speech that I planned to give today at my swearing-in. Okay, I will call all of the TV stations and have them come up to your hospital room so that you can make your speech."

"Hello, this is Miss Haley Tyler Blue's spokesperson and Secret Service agent calling from the hospital. The president wants to give her speech from the hospital room, would you be able to come to the hospital tonight so that we can broadcast her speech? Of course, we'll be up in a few hours. By the way, how is our president? She is well, she only got shot in the arm because the attacker missed and missed badly."

Good news. Miss Haley Tyler Blue the news media is on the way and they will be here in a few hours from now. Good because I want to make my attackers see that I am still alive and kicking.

By the way, have you gotten any leads who tried to kill me today? Well, we have a few leads. We have a lead that someone from the World Trade Organization was involved. Another lead is someone from the UN. Another lead said someone from the Paris Climate Committee. And we have another lead that said it was a person from the World Trade Organization. But we're still investigating.

Are we ready to go live? Yes, we are. All of the news channels are here and they are ready to go live to every home in the United States. Good, let's go live. I am ready.

We are live now.

"Good evening, America. I am coming from my hospital room where I have just received treatment for my gunshot. As many Americans may or may not know, there was an attempted assassination today. But I plan on making my speech and being sworn in tomorrow at the White House. Until then, Miss Vice President Kelly Johnson will be in charge. At that moment, she will serve as acting president until tomorrow morning.

Good evening, as American people, we have faced high unemployment, high inflation, high crime, and a high number of illegal crossings at our borders tonight. While I had respect for our previous president, Miss Tyler Polar, I didn't have respect for her leadership. Tonight, I come to you as your president and your voice of freedom. I have directed Congress tonight to work on bills to get the United States out of the World Trade Organization and to get out of the United Nations, the Paris Climate Organization, and all other New World organizations. I have contacted Congress to cut both taxes for all people and corporations to record lows. We need to straighten out our country's mess. Additionally, I want Congress to release all of our previous presidents' letters and notes to show you all how much she hated America and the American people. I have also been in contact with the Federal Reserve to cut interest rates immediately so that we can get this nation up and running again. Good night and God bless the USA and the American people."

Mr. Carson can you come into the room for a minute we are very angry at you little fucker. When you came back from shooting the new president you told us that she was dead.
Mr.Carson she was dead she fell to the ground and as far as I see she didn't get up. But how in the hell do you explain that she just gave her speech 9n her campaign promises and she said everything that she said about what she was going to do in the speech? Now since she's still alive we are fucked. Do you understand? But you're not fucked Mr. Carson because you are dead right now. Mr. Blame would you do the horner of course Mr. Blame pulls the trigger, Mr Carson is dead. What do you want to do with the body leave the body here and make it look like a Sudiced. We will call the cops and say that Mr. Cason went mad and blew his brains out. Hello, this is Mr. Came we have a little problem in our building we just had Mr Carson he just blew his brains out. And we need and police officer and life squad here. Okay, we are on the way out. The police and the life squad arrive and find the body, the person who called the cops is nowhere to be seen.

Good news Miss President we have caught the people who tried to kill you today. But there is one problem the main person who tried to kill you today. He was found dead and the police are treating it as murder. Even though the police got a call that Mr. Carson blew his brain out and commented Sudiced. But we have everyone else at the police station and they are singing like birds. They are giving names and locations and the people who want you dead. And we are excited to throw the book at them. Did they say how many people were involved? While it was a very well and consternate operation. But the guy who shot you fell. But the rest of the chicken out at the last minute. They wanted to make sure that I was dead, didn't they? 

Secret service agents tried but failed didn't they they sure did. You just can't keep a good girl down. because we believe in America and we will make America strong again. 

Ps part 3 will be coming if this gets approved.