Undying Hate - An unfinished free verse poem

Spontaneously written for my poetizer dot com portfolio, this freestyle poem failed. It isn't really doublets or couplets either. The problem was: I lost the writing flow, and simply had no better ideas. On the good side: I can delete, or improve, it later. ;-)

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Hate: Condemned, feared, ridiculed, or outcast,

Undying hate still is a factual power in each life.

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Few of us find faith, mindset, and fortitude, as;

Our bodies will fail us, yet timeless hate won't.

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We can worship denial, due to science, whatever,

Yet hate has more power, and can be more clever.

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I remember the women's catalog of demands made,

Each convinced they offer better than undying hate.

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Still, if I share the real truth of my not-so-easy life,

Hate was more reliable & more useful than a wife!

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Some call it a dark path, freak out, or commit crime,

I call it a tricky choice, as hate left us `learning time´.

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Life needs discipline, timing, and wisdom for good,

Media only show the failures, who never understood.

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Maturity can make us realize in life, or much too late:

That hate needs an `us´ living up to our chosen fate!

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Easy, reckless, and irresponsible aren't adult enough? 

Nope, undying hate isn't about a selfish coward in love!

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Hence, even when worried about my mortal way to end; 

Undying hate made no demands, for it came as a friend!

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