The Beast Battle

Your story has an interesting plot and narrative. Here are some grammar corrections:

1. The story starts with a mysterious man killing a businessman (Abhi Chauhan) and leaving a note stating, "This is a war between me and God."

2. The story shifts to ACP Satya Joshi chasing and arresting a criminal. When Satya enters the police station, he is informed about the murder.

3. The police team arrives at the spot and starts the investigation, finding a piece of paper stating, "Ravan is Back."

4. Then Satya is summoned by the Commissioner, Jai Dixit.

(Conversation)

Satya: (salute) Jai Hind, sir.

Jai: I want you to take charge of the case.

Satya: Yes, sir.

Jai: I want you to nab the culprit as soon as possible, as the victim was a big businessman, and the higher authorities have given the order to solve it as soon as possible.

Satya: Don't worry, sir; the culprit will be under our custody.

5. Then, he selects some officers and forms a team. The team consists of some constables, a head constable, sub-inspector Pankaj Shinde.

6. Satya starts investigating the case, but no leads can be found. The story shifts to Ravan committing another murder (Ranjan Malhotra) and leaving another note stating, "I will show the world the real face of their God."

7. The police find the note and start working on it. Meanwhile, Ravan hacks the police system and delivers a message.

(Conversation)

Ravan: Hello, ACP, inn murders ke bare mein soch rahe ho, maat socho kyun ki ye murders nahi, saza hai. Waise main Ravan hu. Ahha treta ka nahi kalyug ka.

Satya: Kaisi saza?

Ravan: Bina soche samjhe kisi ko bhi apna dharam bana lene ki saza.

Satya: Matlab kya hai tumhara?

Ravan: Bas yun samajh lo ki main iss duniya ko satya dikhane aaya hu. Aur tum mere maarg mein mat aao kyu iska parinam shub nahi hoga. Aur yeh sirf shuruaat hai.

(Call disconnected)

8. Now, Satya started thinking of all this conversation. He was thinking about some words like Dharm.

9. He started the investigation from the beginning.

10. He gathered all the information about Abhi Chauhan and Rajan Malhotra and he gets to know that they were religious. In fact, they visit the temple, worship God, and donate lots of money to the temple.

11. He even gets to know that they donate money to the temple but never help the poor, and they had taken the land belonging to the poor farmers forcefully without paying any compensation.

12. Now, Satya and his team started making a list of influential people who are religious and did wrong to the people for their benefit. After research, they get to know about the next target of Ravan, and it shocked them because it was the commissioner.

13. They informed the commissioner and sent some constables for his safety.

14. Ravan arrived there disguised as a constable and killed the commissioner. When Satya showed the dead body of the commissioner, there were three colors: Saffron, Yellow, and Black. He couldn't understand what it meant.

15. Then he met a lady, Divya, who had a mysterious personality. They had a casual talk, and he started talking about the case.

Satya: Hindu dharm ke bare mein tumhe kafi kuch pata hoga. Hai na?

Divya: Kya janna chahte ho?

Satya: Hindu dharm mein colors ki importance kya hai?

Divya: Har ek rang kisi na kisi chiz ko represent karte hain. Tumhe kiske baare mein janna hai?

Satya: Kesari, pilla, aur Kala rang.

Divya: Hindu dharm mein kesari rang ko uchh darja diya gaya hai aur ye dharm ko darshata hai. Pilla gyan aur shikne ka rang hai, aur Kala rang vinash aur andhere ka pratik hai.

Satya: Agar inn tino rango ko ek sath jod diya jaye toh iska matlab hai…

Divya: Dharm aur gyan ka vinash.

16. Between the conversation, Satya got a call about another murder. He left the conversation and reached the crime spot. After the necessary formalities, he gave an order to his team to gather all the information about the victim.

17. The next day, he got all the information about the victim from his team.

Pankaj: Sir, victim ka naam Dev Vashisht tha. Peshe se ek businessman tha, lekin Kai sari mandiro ka trustee bhi tha. Aur sir, iss pe kai sare scam ke cases chal rahe the, lekin koi evidence na milne ke wajah se uske khilaf koi action nahi liya gaya. Mandir ke funds ko badhane ke liye publicity stunt karta aur logo ko yakeen dilata ki uss mandir mein bhagwan baste hain taki mandir ka fund badh sake. Aur Abhi Chauhan, Ranjan Malhotra, aur Dev Vashisht mein ek baat common hai. Yeh teeno mandiron ke trustee hain. Sir, ek aur baat pata chala hai ki commissioner sir inke sabse bade supporter the.

Satya: Isiliye Ravan ne inn sab ko mara hai. Lekin wo aisa kyu kar raha hai?

Satya started thinking about Ravan. As soon as he started thinking, the police system got a call from Ravan.

Ravan: Mere bare mein soch rahe ho, Satya, tumhari muskil aasan kar deta hu. Jo bhi puchna ho, puchlo, tumhare sare sawalo ke jawab milenge tumhe.

Satya: Mujhe sirf ek sawal ka jawab chahiye. Kyun?

Ravan: Thik hai, tumhe jaana hai, toh suno. Main logo ko ye batana chahta hu ki wo galat raaste par hai. Jisse wo dharm kehte hain, wo aadharm hai. Unhe lagta hai ki bhagwan kabhi galti nahi karte hain, lekin ye sach nahi hai. Galti sab se hoti hai, lekin bhagwan se adhram hota hai, kyu ki unhe sab pata hai, phir galat ka sath dete hain, aur hum insaan iss adharm ko bhi dharm maan lete hain. Kyun? Kyun ki hum pehle se hi unhe bhagwan maante hain, aur bhagwan ki galti koi nahi dekhta hai.

Satya: Tumhe lagta hai ki bhagwan bhi galti karte hai? Aur aisa kyu lagta hai tumhe?

Ravan: Tumne kabhi Ramayan aur Mahabharat padhi hai?

Satya: Haan.

Ravan: Phir mujhe ye batao ki Ramayan ka hero kon hai?

Satya: Bhagwan Shri Ram.

Ravan: Aur Mahabharat ka?

Satya: Krishn.

Ravan: Ab mujhe ye batao ki inhone aisa kon sa kaam kiya ke inhe bhagwan ki upadhi mili?

Satya: Bhagwan Shri Ram ne Ravan ka vadha kiya, aur Krishn ne dharm ke liye yudh kiya.

Ravan: Aisa loggo ko lagta hai, lekin ye sach nahi hai. Ram ko Mariyada Purshottam Shri Ram kaha jaata. Aur ye kaisi Mariyada hai ki jo apse pyaar kare usse kisi ek ke kehne par tyaag do. Tumhara waqt bardad nahi karunga, bas itna samajh lo ki main samaaj ke issi dharm ke khilaaf hu, aur kisi ke nahi.

Now Satya went to meet Divya; he asked her to help him with the case, and Divya agreed. The next day, Ravan challenged him that there was a bomb in the temple. When Divya heard the voice, a tear rolled down from her eyes. Then Ravan started speaking over a mic; he asked them whether they had faith in their god or not. People were terrified and answered yes. He told them that the bomb was about to blast. They can be saved if they throw out the statue of God from the temple. People were puzzled about whether to throw it or not. People started looking at their children, wives, and their families with teary eyes and agreed to throw the god statue. Now, Satya and his team somehow got to know that Ravan was hiding somewhere in the temple. The police started searching for him and found him. They stopped the people from throwing the idol of God. The police arrested Ravan and started the interrogation.

Satya: Tumhe lagta tha ki tum kabhi pakde nahi jaoge, lekin dekho aaj tum hamare kaid mein ho. Ab jo bhi pucha jaye uska sach sach jawab dena.

Ravan: Dharm, adharm, nyay, anyay, sahi, galat ye sab taqatwar ka adhikar hai. Adharm toh bhagwan ne bhi kiya lekin unka adharm koi nahi manta. Mahabharat mein jab Karn ne Dropadi ko vaishiya kaha toh use kurukshetra mein mrityu mili, lekin jab krishn ne aurto ko nahate hue dekha unke vastra churaye toh usse unki Leela kahi gayi. Kurukshetra ka yudh toh manushya ke beech tha, phir kis adhikar se Krishn ne Hanuman ko shamil kiya? Aur toh aur jab krishn pal bhar mein uss yudh ko samapt kar sakte the, phir kyu nahi Kiya, bas dharm ke liye, ab dharm kya zindagi se bhi zyada zaroori hai, lekin ye adharm logo ko nahi dikhti hai. Chori karna gunah hota hai na, phir jab krishn ne chori ki toh usse saza milne ki jagah usse makhan chor ke naam se pooja karne lage, kyu, kyun ki wo bhagwan hai, hum sabse zyada taqatwar hai. Jab duniya mein dharm ke naam par adharm Kiya jata hai, tab kyu nahi ata hai wo bachane ke liye.

Satya: Tumhe dharm aur bhagwan se itni nafrat kyu hai? Apne aap ko dekho, ek haivan ban chuke ho.

Ravan: Jab kisi se uski masumiyat aur insaaniyat dono chin li jaye, toh uske paas sirf havaniyat bachti hai.

Ravan: Ek chote se gaon ka rehne wala tha main, ek middle-class family se tha main, lekin jaisa bhi tha, khush tha. Mere maa-baap ko bhagwan par bohot bharosa tha, hamesha Puja path mein laagi rehti, magar kuch hua nahi. Lekin ek din mandir mein chori Hui thi, churane wala pandit ka beta tha, aur apne bete ko bachane ke liye chori ka ilzaam mere papa pe lagaya. Hamare yahan bhagwan ko sabse zyada importance di jati hai, aur bhagwan ke baad pandit ko. Isliye logo ne pandit ki baat maan li, aur mere papa pe hamla kar diya. Meri maa mere papa ko bachane gayi toh unhe bhi nahi chora, un logo ka gussa meri puri family par barsa, and they killed my family in front of my eyes. They even tried to kill me, lekin main Bach Gaya. Isliye nafrat hai mujhe dharm aur bhagwan se, aur usse manne walo se bhi.

Satya: Tumhare sath jo bhi hua hai, galat hai, lekin isska matlab yeh bilkul bhi nahi hai ki tum dusro ki jaan lo.

Ravan: Meri galti kya thi. Insab ke baad maine thaan liya ki Main sab barbaad kisiko nahi chorunga. Wo toh tum bich me aagai.

Satya: Tumne jo kiya hai, uski koi maafi nahi hai, aur tumhe iski saza bhi zaroor milegi.

Satya left the place. After some days, Ravan got an opportunity to flee the jail and ran away.

Part 2 coming soon.