Am Going To Stop Smoking Cigar

Am Going To Stop Smoking Cigar

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This story is based on a fantasy journal.

Characters: Lord Brahma, Vishwa a normal boy who smokes cigarette, Vishwa's mom.

Scene 1:

Place: Unknown place with the look of Heaven and Hell.

Vishwa:

Where am I now, looks like a very new place to me.

Is any one there.

Hello, Any one there.

Lord Brahma appears now. He stared at Vishwa.

Lord Brahma:

Yes,tell me.What do you want.You are all dead person now.

No one except me would be able to hear your voice.

Vishwa:

What the hell you mean.

Lord Brahma:

Exactly.

I mean it.

You are in Hell now.

Tell me, how can I help you.

Vishwa:

But how.

How could this happen.

How could this happen to me.

And that too, to me.

Lord Brahma:

You want to know, isnt it.

You have a life span of nearly 87 years.

You have a good percentage of good deeds too.

Vishwa:

Then whats happening around me.

Lord Brahma:

What happened is actually, what you know, but you don't know.

Will say it clearly now.

You had a very serious smoking habit.

Your lungs were that so spoiled.

You yourselves has planned well, built your steps, to knock the doors of hell here.

Vishwa:

But how.I never thought, it would be this serious.

There were lot many people who smoke, why should this happen to me alone.

Do I look that so stupid.

Lord Brahma:

Don't you know the seriousness when you were smoking.

Everything is well known to the world.

I will tell you a fact, which you were not aware.

Your lungs were in a bad condition, since from your birth.

Your father was a chain smoker and through him your lungs were badly infected, which went unnoticed long time.

Though your dad was a chain smoker,he somehow tried to survive till 70 years. But his gene has left you a serious lung infection.

Adding fuel to fire,you started smoking playfully and then seriously too and never realised to stop it and your health was totally affected, that it could not be recovered at all.

Your mom had lot of dreams for you.

You to had.

Vishwa:

And, don't you know.

It was not my choice.

It just happened on the way. It was all in the game of youth.

Might be situations would have taken me to that level.

I happen to have lot of stress in my work, in my family, love failure too, what then a man will do now, to handle his stress and to have his own kind of happiness with his friends.

Lord Brahma:

Do you know how many people are without a proper family.

Do you know how many people are without job for their daily survival.

Do you know how many people are without proper health and how they struggle.

Love is always in the air.

Have any one signed up an agreement saying,No girl will love or marry you.

There will always be a new and next love when required.

Love failure is just a reason to waste your energy and time.

Miles to go.

You should have handled your job and family in a well planned way or might be you could have had some other job too who knows.

Try to love your job and plan it to handle without any stress.

You should have digged your opportunities to settle your issues.

What will be your view ,when your son or daughter says the same reason to smoke.

Will you understand them and buy Cigarette for them,may be a branded ones ,hah is that so.

Or will you suggest them to handle some other good means to handle their issues.

Every lock is well designed with its own key,like wise the human problems too.

Fine ,lets leave this discussion.

Gone is gone.

Nothing more could be done now.

Vishwa:

You people make humans born in this very world and enjoy seeing each one with different problems.

Who knows how would it be, if you were in my situation.

Fine gone is gone, I agree.

I do remember,you said I have my life span till 87 years, and have my good deeds too.

So why couldn't you suggest or give an opportunity for me to continue living in my world to fullfill the dreams of mine and my mom's.

Lord Brahma:

Ouch,but how.

Well,let me think on that.

After few minutes.

Fine.

I would like to take up your request,but with one condition.

I will send you back to your world and you have to stop the smoking habit of atleast one person within one month.

Winning over this, should be the best deal for you to live in your world, till your life span.

Vishwa:

Fine.

I would be happy to take up this deal.

Please bless me for what I want to be.

Lord Brahma:

My Blesses ,my boy.

Scene2:

Vishwa came back to the world and to his home.

Without delay,he started to try convincing some of his friends,family members,and some known and unknown faces to stop smoking.No use,no one heard him.

Nothing worked out for him.

He was reciprocated in a bad manner.

Days gone and almost 28 days has been completed.

Only 3 more days were left ,to win his life back.

He stood steadily on his bike with these thoughts.

He really don't know what to do, where to go.

He looked at the mirror and talked to himself,

Will this face, face the world.

Involuntarily, he questioned towards his bike's mirror

"Will you be able to stop smoking to save my life", and stood still, in a second he realised that he himself was a smoker and he did not smoke for past 28 days ,amidst the plan for his survival fit, to win over the condition.

He got it that, he has made himself to stop smoking and is actually a true win to win his life.

He crazily jumped around to get back his life.

Vishwa's mom: Vishwa get up, its time for office, get ready now.

Vishwa: Got up ma, actually.

Got ready now.

Where should I drop you on the way today.

Mom: Nilgiris da.

Vishwa :Come lets go.

Vishwa: He started recalling himself, about the dream and began to think what happened actually.


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