Subhashree Panda

Horror Tragedy Thriller

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Subhashree Panda

Horror Tragedy Thriller

Who are you Mr?

Who are you Mr?

8 mins
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In this modern era, we do not believe in Indian mythology. Even if I used to be the same, a city girl who does not believe in spirits. My whole life's philosophy changed when I encountered him.

During my vacation, I visited my grandparents, which we usually do. I have strict parents. Freedom has never been in my favour. But I was lucky because my parents dropped me off this time and left for a business trip. I enjoyed the winter's cool breeze. Day by day passed, I was thinking of something adventurous, so I went to a nearby forest area that was restricted due to mythological conception. There was a wishing well where all the wishes were fulfilled, but in a condition of which I was not aware. I went there and I wished to see a spirit. And one voice echoed, ''Your wish is granted without condition because...", then I opened my eyes but I could not find anyone. I left the place as soon as possible.

 Now, the chaos begins.

So, the night was quite weird as I constantly felt someone's presence. So, the next morning when the first rays of sunlight lit up my room I woke up. And I was extremely terrified when I found my right palm is sweaty and red as if someone had held it for a long time. I asked my grandparents if they had come to my room last night, but they denied it. I spent the whole day figuring out what exactly happened last night. At the same time, my phone rang. The call was from my bestie, she said there was a small surprise for you near the peak point. I was amazed at how she knows that I was in this village. Well, I thought maybe my parents mentioned that. However, I left for the peak point. I was astonished to see all my friends' circle present over there. We had a lot of gossip and food, of course. We decided to capture the moment. So, for a better background, we moved to the edge of the peak point. Sahil came closer and whispered, "Can you be mine; "you must be mine". I was stunned because we were already together and till now hadn't encountered his possessive side.

At the very next moment, he said, "sorry, but this is the only way we can be together forever" and pushed from the edge of the peak point. while falling from the top of a mountain, there was a rare chance of survival. The only thought running through my mind was, "Why have you done this Mr Sahil? 

When I opened my eyes, I was wondering whether I was alive or a soul. Many questions were running through my unstable mind. My friends and doctor arrived. I was relieved when the doctor mentioned that you are lucky you survived. But only three major questions were, "Why did Sahil push me? Who brought me here? How did I survive after a major incident?

I asked the doctor, who brought me here? The doctor said, Mr Vidyut brought me here and called your friends. I wondered again how he found me and how he knew my friends. Then when I asked my friends where Sahil was, I asked how you all guys knew that I was there. They said Sahil said to us and planned the surprise meet-up. Still, a question, how does he know that I am here? I called my parents instantly and asked, "Did you say to someone that I am in granny's village, and do you know any person named Mr Vidyut? The instant answer to both questions was no.

I called Sahil's mother and asked where Sahil was because his phone was switched off. The answer I received made me feel the current flow in my body (basically, the shock of state).

The answer on the other said was 'we lost him yesterday in an accident. I was lost for a moment there were no words which could describe my grief towards my love.

I was lost in thoughts, and then suddenly I realized wait, who was he then? I discussed this with my friends, and everyone was stunned. And they mentioned that we caught him when he pushed you but he escaped.

Many questions were running through my mind, moving clueless ahead.

I went straight to my house and said to my friends to go to their respective homes. My grandparents were worried and after seeing my condition they became more worried.

When I narrated the whole story, my grandparents said, did you go to the restricted well to visit? I was shocked and curious at the same time that how he is so, confident. without hiding, I answered them yes. They yelled at me and narrated the incident.

In this village, there was a rich boy who fell in love with a girl and filled all her wishes. But that bright sunny day when the greedy girl went to meet him, she brutally hit him in the head. That day, a villager saw her white designer dress turns out to be red. we didn't doubt until when their love story was revealed and as well as she left the village after the incident.

I asked, what to happened to that boy?

Then, he said he lost his memories and after that, he died.

Tears were rolling down my cheeks. How come a person be so, cruel?

The days were passing with weird incidents constantly. At first, I thought it is a coincidence but then I was, sure enough, it is not any kind of coincidence.

But whenever I was in danger and in a critical situation always, I survived.

One of the neighbours recommended reading the holy book gives solutions to all the problems. The problems in the world and beyond the world. I thought okay I must try it.

Then, the White dress concept stuck in my mind. When my grandparents, narrated the story of the greedy, girl she wore a white dress. Then, I decided to wear the White dress and went to the same well where all this chaos began.

But while going to the well in the jungle road someone patted my back. When I turned, I saw a young handsome dashing man who introduced himself as Mr Vidyut.

I started shooting as many questions as I can.

Me: How do you know me? How do you know my friends? A stranger to Saviour I wanted to know everything about it.

Mr Vidyut: I am your Sahil.

Me: How's this possible?

Mr Vidyut: My body is dead not my soul dear.

Me: My anger was at its peak.

Mr Vidyut: Please believe me there is magic, there is a world beyond this world.

Let me narrate your whole journey till now that too in a detailed manner.

I was surprised because except for Sahil no one knows the journey that detailed

Then, I started to believe him.

Mr Vidyut/Sahil: where are you going?

Me:I am going near the well where all the tragedy started.

Mr Vidyut/Sahil: It seems very fishy. please take care. I feel suspicious towards Ahaan.

Me: Who is he?

Mr Vidyut/Sahil: He is the boy who was killed by her greedy girlfriend and later on all the villagers found him dead in this well.

Me:what? And with much curious asked him Do you know that every wish is filled if we speak near the well.

Mr Vidyut/Sahil: He just smiled at me and said every wish/work done must have any selfish reason behind it.

Me: I said the well granted my wish without any condition.

Mr Vidyut/Sahil: what did you ask for miss?

Me: To see a ghost

Mr Vidyut/Sahil: I don't believe it.

Me: Yes. Isn't it cool?

Mr Vidyut/Sahil: I don't believe it

And the argument went on.

Mr Vidyut/Sahil: He smiled and said you are looking cute when you argue. Suddenly he realizes something and left the place hurriedly. 

I reached the well and yelled out loud. A person with “sapphire eyes” and “bronzed caramel skin” appeared in front of me. I was hypnotic for a moment. I asked, "Who are you Mr."? 

And he replied I am the only one who wants to be with you forever. With his feathery voice, I could hardly hear him speak above the noise.

Me:Are you the one who fulfils all the wishes?

Ahaan:yes

Me:So, my first question is why you filled my wish without any condition?

Ahaan:Because love happens without any condition. That day when I saw you in the white dress with a pure smile I was mesmerised. It just reminded my golden love days. You are very genuine girl ever I met.

Me: I was astonished, how come a ghost can fall in love?

Then instantly I asked, why did you try to kill me?

Ahaan:Because this is the only way we can stay forever. I do not want to lose you at any cost and approached slowly towards me

Me:I screamed, Nooooooo!!!

Sahil appeared and whispered in my ears you change the outfit, till then I will stop him with my power.

I rushed towards a hut.

Immediately, after that when I came back.

Sahil: Just burn this white dress as well as the red packet.

Ahaan:I beg you, please do not do this!

Without listening to Ahaan, I burned the white dress and the red packet.


Ahaan vanished in the air.


I turned towards Sahil with teary eyes, how come always you find all the solutions to my problem?

Sahil:I am a genius you see!!. Well, jokes apart, after listening to you. I went straight to their family who had migrated from this village a long time ago. There I narrated the whole scenario. After many discussions, pleadings and arguments they finally revealed that if the girl whom Ahaan loves burns his favourite attire (designer white dress) and the red packet then at this condition his soul will vanish from this earth.

Me:Sahil...I wish you would stay with me forever.


At the same time, someone splashed water on me. when I opened my eyes, I was in great relief. My mom said to freshen up as we all are going to our grandparent's home.

Me: Was it a coincidence dream/or a predicted future dream???


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