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Bhagirathi Mohanty

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Bhagirathi Mohanty

Others


The unrevealed secrecy

The unrevealed secrecy

8 mins 81 8 mins 81

Ajit was a toddler when his parents died in a dreadful accident. He stood a mute spectator at the moment their pyre was burning. Before the burial ceremony Akshay appreased Ajit's relatives to accomplish his parents ceremony but no body responded to it.Consequantly, Akshay installed it . Since then , Ambika and Akshay adopted him legally. He used to move closer to them  

    Akshay was a permanent deweller of the ward where as Ajit's parents lived in a rental colony.

    Ambika loved Ajit more than any precious thing in the world. But she was incapable of providing with breast feeding as she was sterile. In stead of it she made him habituated of bottle feeding when he was hungry. 

   A few people in the colony knew that Ajit hàd been adopted to the couple. The couple didn't hesitate to fulfill all that he wished. 

     In the mean time, a prodigy happened. Ambika was expectant. Ajit proved lucky for the family. On the occasion of twenty-first day a delicious feast was contrived.  The male baby was named Amit, Ajit's younger brother. After three years a baby girl was born. She was named Ananya. Only before five years the house seemed a dreary desert but now it is filled with commotion.

       Amit and Ananya had a great respect to Ajit.  Every word of his was carried out with honour. Amit and Ananya were better than Ajit regarding their academic performance. He inspired them to do the best in all exams.

     Inadvertently, both Ajit and Amit loved the same girl , Adyasa but she loved Ajit more profoundly than Amit as he was very caring to her . Both the brothers differed in their love making. Ajit was very sober and submissive . His orthodox mind did not allow dating .By doing this he tested her patience. 

    On the other hand, Amit was very annoying. He wanted her for dating, consistently. He desired to marry her before he joined in the medical course.

  Ajit could confirm in the joint entrance but the responsibility of the home made his head weighty. Akshay had a high B.P. and suffered from mild heart attack . Ambika  was under grip of acidity and her regular meals had been impade d . Çonsequeñtly, He blotted out what he was añd what he ought to do for him self. 

    One of these days he found Amit in an intimate pick up with Adyasa.He could not believe his eyes. What a treacherous girl Adyasa is ! Does she know that Amit is his brother? 

      But one thing he must be clear whether Adyasa fell in love with Amit or became smitten to her.

       Meantime, the relatives of Adyasa put forward marriage proposal of Adyasa 's elder brother . To Ajit's knowledge Somit was as hand some as him self having a satisfied remunerative job. The procedure started In the end it was postponed due to negligible cause of Somit 's absence on that day. Heartily Ananya did not like this proposal to come in to being as her she wanted to marry the boy of her heart . Nonetheless,she wanted to keep it a secret .Susil didn't like it to be revealed before he completed his P.G. degree in medicine.

     Beginning from Ajit to Ananya all had their special attitude of love. All were in an unsettled position.  Each of themselves tried to to prove himself guilt-free. They loved and respected Ambika so much that they had no courage to stand before her. But she had to settle their marriage in a stipulated time. Within the restricted period they will have to open up the names of they beloveds and wedding will be performed.

    All of them were in confusion. They went on discussing in the confidential level .

   Ajit felt it needless to speak out his mind in withdrawing his love to Adya as this would be followed by dispute between the two brothers.  In this connection , Amit was the best choice.But he couldn't clear out his mind to his mother as he was still to decide whether to cancel or continue his love to Adyasa. Ananya with Susil; was strictly confidential.

     Time elapsed . When they were asked separetely , they told that they agreed to their mother as regards to marriage. 

    All on a sudden, Amit broke out to disagreement asking her , "If they are asked commonly or separately will anyone of your sons and daughter say openly about their love ?

       "But I want it. This is what education has taught us_ frankness that you feel right.Even if you don't feel you should tell it . After marriage a long way to walk along. Therefore I allow intercaste marriage . mind it big and small rivers lose their own identify when they mingle in the sea . Come on Amit ."


    With reverence Amit says ," You are really great Mam . We feel proud of you.But the world is not so simple as you think. The lady who loves you today may leave you tomorrow."

   "But life will roll on .It will façe lows and highs.I am worried because you are all above thirties; above marriageable age. You have all been settled up in your jobs. Speak out your mind lest I will pencil in my plan . It is my order to you.

    All were in vain. If they divulge the truth under no circumstances Ambika will açcede it.

     Time passed by . Akshay and Ambika lost interest in anyone's marriage.The secrecy remained unrevealed for ever


Ajit was a toddler when his parents died in a dreadful accident. He stood a mute spectator at the moment their pyre was burning. Before the burial ceremony Akshay appreased Ajit's relatives to accomplish his parents ceremony but no body responded to it.Consequantly, Akshay installed it . Since then , Ambika and Akshay adopted him legally. He used to move closer to them  

    Akshay was a permanent deweller of the ward where as Ajit's parents lived in a rental colony.

    Ambika loved Ajit more than any precious thing in the world. But she was incapable of providing with breast feeding as she was sterile. In stead of it she made him habituated of bottle feeding when he was hungry. 

   A few people in the colony knew that Ajit hàd been adopted to the couple. The couple didn't hesitate to fulfill all that he wished. 

     In the mean time, a prodigy happened. Ambika was expectant. Ajit proved lucky for the family. On the occasion of twenty-first day a delicious feast was contrived.  The male baby was named Amit, Ajit's younger brother. After three years a baby girl was born. She was named Ananya. Only before five years the house seemed a dreary desert but now it is filled with commotion.

       Amit and Ananya had a great respect to Ajit.  Every word of his was carried out with honour. Amit and Ananya were better than Ajit regarding their academic performance. He inspired them to do the best in all exams.

     Inadvertently, both Ajit and Amit loved the same girl , Adyasa but she loved Ajit more profoundly than Amit as he was very caring to her . Both the brothers differed in their love making. Ajit was very sober and submissive . His orthodox mind did not allow dating .By doing this he tested her patience. 

    On the other hand, Amit was very annoying. He wanted her for dating, consistently. He desired to marry her before he joined in the medical course.

  Ajit could confirm in the joint entrance but the responsibility of the home made his head weighty. Akshay had a high B.P. and suffered from mild heart attack . Ambika  was under grip of acidity and her regular meals had been impade d . Çonsequeñtly, He blotted out what he was añd what he ought to do for him self. 

    One of these days he found Amit in an intimate pick up with Adyasa.He could not believe his eyes. What a treacherous girl Adyasa is ! Does she know that Amit is his brother? 

      But one thing he must be clear whether Adyasa fell in love with Amit or became smitten to her.

       Meantime, the relatives of Adyasa put forward marriage proposal of Adyasa 's elder brother . To Ajit's knowledge Somit was as hand some as him self having a satisfied remunerative job. The procedure started In the end it was postponed due to negligible cause of Somit 's absence on that day. Heartily Ananya did not like this proposal to come in to being as her she wanted to marry the boy of her heart . Nonetheless,she wanted to keep it a secret .Susil didn't like it to be revealed before he completed his P.G. degree in medicine.

     Beginning from Ajit to Ananya all had their special attitude of love. All were in an unsettled position.  Each of themselves tried to to prove himself guilt-free. They loved and respected Ambika so much that they had no courage to stand before her. But she had to settle their marriage in a stipulated time. Within the restricted period they will have to open up the names of they beloveds and wedding will be performed.

    All of them were in confusion. They went on discussing in the confidential level .

   Ajit felt it needless to speak out his mind in withdrawing his love to Adya as this would be followed by dispute between the two brothers.  In this connection , Amit was the best choice.But he couldn't clear out his mind to his mother as he was still to decide whether to cancel or continue his love to Adyasa. Ananya with Susil; was strictly confidential.

     Time elapsed . When they were asked separetely , they told that they agreed to their mother as regards to marriage. 

    All on a sudden, Amit broke out to disagreement asking her , "If they are asked commonly or separately will anyone of your sons and daughter say openly about their love ?

       "But I want it. This is what education has taught us_ frankness that you feel right.Even if you don't feel you should tell it . After marriage a long way to walk along. Therefore I allow intercaste marriage . mind it big and smaller rivers lose their own identify when they mingle in the sea . Come on Amit ."


    With reverence Amit says ," You are really great Mam . We feel proud of you.But the world is not so simple as you think. The lady who loves you today may leave you tomorrow."

   "But life will roll on .It will façe lows and highs.I am worried because you are all above thirties; above marriageable age. You have all been settled up in your jobs. Speak out your mind lest I will pencil in my plan . It is my order to you.

    All were in vain. If they divulge the truth under no circumstances Ambika will açcede it.

     Time passed by . Akshay and Ambika lost interest in anyone's marriage.The secrecy remained unrevealed for ever.


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