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Anukriti Soni

Rebellious,seeker,learner

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Let's create a story together ! (2)

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@Shresthasengupta it was so much fun. We should do it more! 🙌

29/06/2019

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#31


The End!

29/06/2019

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Thanks @anuragsoni

28/06/2019

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#29


"You can't escape" Monana heard a wishpering , It was Sussane's voice. She started runnjng away. Wherever she would run she would see Sussane, she turned her direction again and again. Her mom following her,

"Stop Monana where are you going?" Her mothet yelled.


Finally she stopped realising where she has reached. It was the same hospital from where she had left.

"Monana and Katherine! You are under arrest!" They heard a voice from behind.


Monana saw a spirit of Sussane fading slowly in front of her eyes.

28/06/2019

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#27

27/06/2019

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Monana stopped the car in a shock, the man in the car behind him honked badly.


"What are you doing? We could have met with an accident" her mother said.


"Mom, did you heard what I did?" Monana asked horrified.


"No, what!".


" mom Sussane's screams. "


"What are you saying, she is dead and we have fooled all the people blackmailing us" her mom exclaimed.


"No mom..." Monana was about to sag something when she saw an image of Sussane covered with blood in the backseat of the car,

"Mom!!!" She screamed,

"What honey?"

"Can't you see her at the back?"

"No, there's no one"


Just then Monana saw same Susanne's image in front of her car!!

27/06/2019

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#25


"Tell me Lousia, why did you do that to me and your sister"


"What sister?What mother? You guys were no one to me. You left me, never cared for me. Sussane was a family to me"


Monana had the poison. She fell on the floor.


"Let's take her to hospital, after that you can take me to the police station" Cried Monana's mother.


*At the hospital. Monana lying on bed, her mother next to her*


"Mom, that was fake poison, we can still escape"



26/06/2019

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#23


"What the hell is going on? Will someone explain me?"


Monana's mother spoke,

"Yes Lousia was my daughter from my ex boyfriend, a hipster whom I met on a party, before my marriage. I was so weak and incapable of handling this responsibility, also her father disappeared. My mother suggested me to give her to a lady working in a hospital.

Things worked out and I thought my life was back on track. Then I met Monana's dad and fell in love with him. We got married, but after my marriage that lady whom I had given Lousia started calling me, she wanted me to take Lousia back as she was in love and wanted to marry someone. I tried bribing her but nothing worked. At last she sent Lousia to an orphanage. I felt so sad for my daughter. Later one day when I saw that same lady ,because of whom my daughter had to face orphanage ,at Sussane's birthday party. Monana told me she was Sussane's mom. From that day I wanted to take revenge from her but Monana and Sussane's friendship used to irritate me a lot. The day Monana told me she likes Sussane's boyfriend, was the day when I decided that the time has come.

Me and Monana made plan to cover Sussane in a hollow tank on an under construction building and throw her from there, I don't know how Lousia reached there, I haven't seen her in years." Monana's mom said sobbing.


"You are so shelfish woman, You didn't even thought that my mother had protected Lousia for all those years. She just left her when she wanted to start her new life. You know what mom has told us about Louisa and you never went to see her but we used to visit her on weekends, she was like a family. That day she came to visit her and went with me to play.

Oh my dear Lousia! She was so unfortunate to die in my place" Sussane said pointing to Monana's mom, grief was clear in her voice.


Meanwhile Monana appeared from kitchen with a bottle of poison in her hand,

"I don't want to live, my mom betrayed me about my half sister and later used me to take revenge, she even brainwashed her own daughter to turn her into a criminal, I want to die" She cried.


"Please don't punish her for my sins Edward, she is carrying your baby, she loves you a lot. Please save her" Monana's mom pleaded.


Everyone heard a sound of police van's siren from outside.


22/06/2019

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@Sreshtha_Sengupta Indeed it is, I like working with you, you always give new directions to the story.

This is a really fun way of creating stories where even the writers get to see new surprise everytime. :)

19/06/2019

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#21

Monana's mom sprinkled some water on her face and get her back to her senses.

"Now everyone is alright, so can we please get back to what you did to my daughter" Edward's dad said as Monana's opened her eyes.

"Don't think that just having my child be sufficient for you to get out of this. You committed a sin Monana's" Edward said loudly.


"What are you saying Edward? She is your wife. Have some mercy" Monana's mom pleaded.

"Whose that girl?" was the first thing that Monana said after coming back to her senses.


The girl with scarf removed her covers,

"Sussane!!!" Monana and her mother said in unison.

19/06/2019